Chapter 7: Arghh.. so cute..

Chapter 5: So .. I have reach chp 5 .. 2 more to go !

Amazing!

Great story ^^

Love this couple!!!

see you in school tomorrow :D

meow meow

owh~~ this is so sweet ^^ i love it~

Hey Eileen! (: I finally had the time to start reading your fic. >< Sorry, I just reached home and I only have time at night. <br />
First thing, I LOVE YOUR POSTER. Haha, but the thing that shocked me at first is that I thought the girl is Lizzy. SEUNGYEON LOOKS LIKE LIZZY IN TH POSTER DOESN'T SHE?! But of course, after taking a good look at it, I realised that it was actually Seungyeon. Alright, I sound dumb. :P<br />
Your fanfic is such a sweet and heartwarming story. But somehow if there is just a bit more excitement, it will be better. Your fanfic sounds like a diary. Your need to be more descriptive in order to make your story more interesting. Try to go slow and steady, that way you will get more attention from your readers. ;D Oh man, I sound so... Sorry if you are offended. T.T I made quite harsh critics when my writing isn't that good either.<br />
But other than that, I think your english is not bad at all! I don't understand why one of them say that it wasn't good. <br />
Haha, a long comment huh? Well, YOU HAVE TO GET USE TO IT! I usually make long comments. Well, usually, unless I'm lazy. >< <br />
Okay, got to read other fanfics. I haven't read finish the other fanfics that I am suppose to. Anyway, looking forward to your next chapter & hwaiting! (:

awwwww sweet valentine day :) seungyeon so luckyy . onew treat het so nice :)