-Valentine Part 1-

I Started Loving You Without Knowing It

~Jinki's POV~

"Yawn." I got out of bed and saw Seungyeon was still asleep. I look at the clock, 9 am. Still early so I went to the bathroom to get myself wash up. I got out after 20 minutes. Fully awake after washing myself, I should get breakfast ready. When I was walking to the kitchen, my phone rang. "Annyeong haseyo! Omma here~!" Oh! Omma I miss you so much! " I miss you too." We take for awhile as I didn't talk to omma for a long time. We hang up the phone after 10 minutes passed. After I hang up, I saw the date on my phone. "6 February." 9 more days to valentine. Maybe I should find a job and get a greatest valentine present for Seungyeon that she will love forever.

~Seungyeon's POV~

"Yawn. Oh it's already 10.30 am." I say to myself as I look at the clock. I got out of my room and saw Jinki making breakfast. I walk to him and give him a back hug. He turned around and give me a kiss on my forehead and hug me after that. "Good morning!" I said to him with a bright smile on my face. "I'm going to be coming back home late today." Jinki said with a warm smile. "Why will you be coming home late?" I ask with a question face. "You give me 9 days and I will tell you after that." he reply placing our breakfast on the table. I looked at him and smile, I will wait then.

~Jinki's POV~

"I will be leaving now." I shout to Seungyeon as she's in her room. She suddenly run out the room and asked "Where are you going? Can I go with you?" she ask with a puppy face. I wanted to say yes as she look so cute but I? remind myself not to as it's a surprise. I have no choice but to say no. I left the house looking at her with a sad face.

~Seungyeon's POV~

"I will be leaving now." Jinki shouted as I rushed out from my room. "Where are you going? Can I go with you?" I ask Jinki with a puppy face but I failed. I was very sad but was wondering what Jinki's up to. I stop thinking and went to do my homework. I listen to my Ipod while doing my homework.

One hour passed by.

"Yawn. Oh my. One hour had already passed?" I thought to myself as I went out of the room to see if Jinki got home. I got out of the room and notice he's not at home. I was kinda disappointed but at the same time I was kinda hungry. "Maybe I should go out and grab something to eat." I thought to myself and went to my room to change. I got out of the house after 10 minutes. I went to a restaurant to eat. While eating, I thought to myself. "Have Jinki eaten?" I was worry, so I called him. But he didn't pick up, I try again but no respond. I was kinda sad but no choice but to eat my lunch alone. After eating, I went around the mall and saw something cute and went to get a closer look. It was a couple keychain. I like the keychain so I brought it home. Still waiting for Jinki to return. I waited for 2 hours and Jinki still not back. I was kinda tired that I took a short nap.

~Jinki's POV~

I went to look for a part-time job and notice a "Wanted need a part-time worker". I went for interview and gotten the job. Since it's my first day of work, I already gotten my first pay.  I count the amount of money I got and saw a beautiful necklace. "I will buy this for Seungyeon." I thought to myself as I look at the price of the necklace. "Wow~! So expensive! I think I have to work harder to buy this." I said. It was already 7 pm in the evening. I took out my phone and saw two missed call from Seungyeon. I felt sorry for not telling Seungyeon but I will tell her in 9 days time.
 

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asmira #1
Chapter 7: Arghh.. so cute..
Jacinta #2
Chapter 5: So .. I have reach chp 5 .. 2 more to go !
-ximini #3
Amazing!
xxinverted
#4
Great story ^^
miggykcy #5
Love this couple!!!
Swagnificent #6
see you in school tomorrow :D
Swagnificent #7
meow meow
fren123 #8
owh~~ this is so sweet ^^ i love it~
10apples
#9
Hey Eileen! (: I finally had the time to start reading your fic. >< Sorry, I just reached home and I only have time at night. <br />
First thing, I LOVE YOUR POSTER. Haha, but the thing that shocked me at first is that I thought the girl is Lizzy. SEUNGYEON LOOKS LIKE LIZZY IN TH POSTER DOESN'T SHE?! But of course, after taking a good look at it, I realised that it was actually Seungyeon. Alright, I sound dumb. :P<br />
Your fanfic is such a sweet and heartwarming story. But somehow if there is just a bit more excitement, it will be better. Your fanfic sounds like a diary. Your need to be more descriptive in order to make your story more interesting. Try to go slow and steady, that way you will get more attention from your readers. ;D Oh man, I sound so... Sorry if you are offended. T.T I made quite harsh critics when my writing isn't that good either.<br />
But other than that, I think your english is not bad at all! I don't understand why one of them say that it wasn't good. <br />
Haha, a long comment huh? Well, YOU HAVE TO GET USE TO IT! I usually make long comments. Well, usually, unless I'm lazy. >< <br />
Okay, got to read other fanfics. I haven't read finish the other fanfics that I am suppose to. Anyway, looking forward to your next chapter & hwaiting! (:
KeymyLover
#10
awwwww sweet valentine day :) seungyeon so luckyy . onew treat het so nice :)