Eleventh

I-Makoto Shinkai natin ang moment na 'to
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It's another Friday night.

The sky boasted of silhouettes of clouds, of the rhapsody of stars' luminosity trying to pierce through them, almost resembling a penumbra.

Joohyun and Seulgi looked at this surreal vision, as they sat in separate swings in the same playground they frequent to, near Joohyun's apartment in Quezon city.

Silence enveloped them — though their hearts beat wildly.

"Dr. Joohyun," Seulgi said. 

 "Para sa 'yo, treat ko, kasi full-fledged manggagawa na rin ako," she smiled meekly. She handed Joohyun a paper bag.

Inside are eight pieces of kwek-kwek, the flour-coated quail eggs with orange coloring, a trademark street food that Filipinos love. 

Joohyun smiled. "Salamat Seul. Tara, hati tayo."

Joohyun handed Seulgi some of it, while she nibbled on the rest.

"Pasensya ka na, eto lang muna, bawi ako sa 'yo sa first suweldo ko as a regular employee," Seulgi said as she chewed.

"This is more than enough Seul," Joohyun said.

You are more than enough.

Their placid exchange mixed with the outside, distant sound of rush-hour traffic and the chatter of people moving, heading somewhere. Internally, there's no quietude though - their minds raced with thoughts of each other, of musings and questions such as - I want to be with you -  Do you want to be with me too?

Joohyun glanced at Seulgi.

She was about to say something when she saw that there's some bits of

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Song for this story: One More Time, One More Chance by Masayoshi Yamazaki (OST: 5 Centimeters per Second, Makoto Shinkai, 2007)

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LiNiLalisa1502
#1
Chapter 30: Thank you for writing this wonderful piece🤧
seulrenebears_
#2
Chapter 30: aaaaaa😭thank you for this beautiful story huhu TT
xantheaverielle
#3
Chapter 30: I'm crying 😭 This is too good, so heartwarming. Grabe 'yung pinagdaanan nila and how they strengthened each other. They might've lost what they had at a time but they found each other again, braver and better the second time around. I love this so much. Thank you for writing. 🥺
taenyforever27
#4
Chapter 30: wow, this fic is just WOW. i wish joohyun's character did not do what she did but i guess if she does then this story will not be good as hell. im trying to read more tagalog seulrene fics bc i feel like i almost read the english ones but the tagalog fics are way too long and more complicated than this at sobrang daming red flag either ni seulgi or ni irene, hindi ko ma-take andi like this writing style better. thank you for writing this fic author, i enjoyed it so much
forgotme #5
Chapter 30: Ganda..wla bng sequel?kakabitin😁.. More stories
Seanaoil #6
Chapter 30: Grabe ang ganda authornim🥺 sobrang ikli pero solid yung impact ng story mo. natapos ko lang within 50mins mag aalas kwarto na may klase pa ko mamayang 8am pero no regrets talaga as in TYSM 🥺💝
kangs0ul
#7
Love the story otor!!! Narealize ko lang matagal tagal din pala sila naghiwalay. Ang ganda anircjsjsjs
39kura #8
Chapter 30: sobrang ganda. ang sarap magbasa ng ganito parang pati ako na-kumpleto. ganun ung feeling. balik po ako ulit (hopefully, with not-so-broken thoughts kasi it’s almost 4am na dito hahah) to properly comment sa buong story huhuhu
honeyblood17
#9
Chapter 30: Wow. This is probably one of the few tagalog (of taglish basta Pinas ang setting) fics that I've read na may tama talaga yung story. Madalas kasi ang angst ng tagalog fics puro external driving force and walang character development. Puro toxic relationship na walang roots. Ang ganda ng self (re)discovery ni Joohyun and Yung very human na justification ng kagagahan nya (the familiar heartbreak vs. new heartbreak) ang ganda ganda ng atake ng angst na yun!
Hisseulgi_
#10
Chapter 30: Grabe sobrang ganda. 😭 Thank you po for this masterpiece <3