You're trying to write a story, not a play! Nobody is going to act out the story.

And colors again!?

What not to do:

1. Don't write in script writing. It makes it seem more like a plan of a play instead of a story. Sure, it might be neat, but its amature writing! When authors write in script writing, I can't feel the emotions the characters are trying to portray that well.

2. Don't color coat your words. It's very boring and its about the same as script writing. It would be a bother for the readers to have to memorize every color for every character.

Remember:

You want you're story to be simple, but not too simple!