Chapter 11: Links

The (Not so) Perfect Story

 

Links. Clicky-clicky!

I think it's annoying.

 

What not to do:

Don't fill your story with a million links. It shows that you can't even describe how something looks and its very annoying to keep clicking.
 

Momo was happy to move to a new house. It was huge!
There was an indoor pool, an indoor bowling alley, an indoor theatre, and an indoor garden.

But, she was most surprised at her room! She loved it. The kitchen was okay. Her own bathroom was luxurious!

 

 

Remember:

Links can bore people and sometimes, I don't even click the link!

Links are fun to click though... like this one -> Click!
And this one because you can keep clicking!->Clicky-click!  [Totally advertising]

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203693
#1
Chapter 19: Thanks so much for your help!!
__happyvirus #2
Chapter 19: Lmao at the story bout a guy and a girl falling in love.
BabysWarriors
#3
Chapter 9: Can I ask a question? But what if you are the OC of the story and you have a name for it?
BabysWarriors
#4
Chapter 9: Did I just saw my own username here? Omg. HAHAHA!
HeyItsBubble
#5
Chapter 19: THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
RoyaltyKY
#6
Chapter 9: When your username appears in an example xD
Thanx for this book tho, it's really saving my life
islandgirlluvsLAY
#7
Chapter 19: You are awesome! Thank you!
trotinetka
#8
Chapter 19: You just saved my life! Thank you very much :) This post is awesome! You're a good person :D