Chapter 11: Links
The (Not so) Perfect Story
Links. Clicky-clicky!
I think it's annoying.
What not to do:
Don't fill your story with a million links. It shows that you can't even describe how something looks and its very annoying to keep clicking.
Momo was happy to move to a new house. It was huge!
There was an indoor pool, an indoor bowling alley, an indoor theatre, and an indoor garden.
But, she was most surprised at her room! She loved it. The kitchen was okay. Her own bathroom was luxurious!
Remember:
Links can bore people and sometimes, I don't even click the link!
Links are fun to click though... like this one -> Click!
And this one because you can keep clicking!->Clicky-click! [Totally advertising]
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