Make It Better

Shooting Stars
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The first thing Jisoo sees in her waking hour the next day is the disarray of books on her bedside table. She’s been multi-tasking three volumes, one of them being a repeat of The Little Prince.

The Rose was needy and vain but The Little Prince still took care of her. Only when he had to leave the planet did the Rose realize that she loved and appreciated him.

Jisoo thought about what happened between The Little Prince and the Rose. Was she really entitled — like Lisa said? What if that someone was taking care of her right this very moment, but in her selfishness and expectation, she couldn't see that?

Was she becoming like the Rose? What did she have to do now, so her Little Prince - or whoever it was taking care of her - would not leave?

Jisoo jumps out of bed to shake off the serious thoughts weighing her down so early in the morning.

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“So, you know how people wish on inanimate objects, or occurrences – out of desperation?”

“Yeah, I’m familiar. What’s going on?” Lisa was getting worried about Jisoo’s obsession for the ethereal and supernatural. 

“I’ve decided to wish on whatever’s available, and see if that works instead of believing in an immaterial being.”

“Dandelions, wishbones, four leaf clovers, shooting stars, 11:11? Which ones?”

Jisoo contemplated on the set of choices. “Shooting stars are my first pick,” she says, confident.

“Easy to say. Tricky bit is actually catching one streak through the sky.”

“Camp out with me when you get off your shift. My yard has a porch, I’ll have some cold beer set out.”

“I’m down, I’m totally down. But Jisoo…sorry to rain on your parade – what if doesn’t work?” Lisa’s bluntness seems to have awakened Jisoo from her ideals.

“We’ll try again tomorrow.”  

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8:09PM. 

Lisa and Jisoo wait for any semblance of a shooting star streaking through the clear, navy sky. A drink in her hand, heart on her sleeve – Jisoo feels hopeful for tonight.

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minarixhirai
SOOOOO. I couldn't resist ANOTHER chapter because I have terribly low EQ and the cathartic process is so strong right now i needed to write this. :-(

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KittenThief #1
Chapter 1: Woah I had forgotten this story! I had to re read a few chapters, but I'm glad that you updated!
I'm still confused though, is Jisoo sick? Is something wrong with Jennie?
I really like this story! And its OK if you need more time or something, take care!
Yoontaennie_07
#2
Chapter 8: I feel bad because I only got to read this now but I swear I got this bookmarked since before. This is amazing really! I adore your writing and I want to read more. (: I actually like this kind of plot and I can’t wait to see what will happen next. I want an update but it’s okay if you take your time, authornim, because I’ll wait for this. ❤️
Jenduks #3
Authornim could you also write a jensoo with Mina(twice) fic but endgame is with jisoo/mina XD
vitaamor
#4
Chapter 8: Something must have happned between lisa and her guardian.hence shes kinda annoyed that jisoo kept on talking bout jennie
syifaksm #5
Chapter 7: finally they’re eyes to eyes??
vitaamor
#6
Chapter 7: Jisoo finally can see jennie!im so thrilled but im also scared that lisa will think jisoo isnt sane.i hope lisa will believe again.but she maybe has her own reason and i cant wait to hear her stories
ztylist
#7
Chapter 7: Chapter 7: This is such a well written fic, the wording and everything is sooo perfect. Thanks for the update authornim
okluiza
#8
Wow fast update
Azhenet
#9
Chapter 7: Yesss they saw each other now
I'm curious of what is going to happen
Thanks for the updat:)'