Susakaele
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> author: Susakaele A fallen Guardian who had been wrongly accused, a human orphan who was supposed to be only a sacrifice, and the verge of the greatest battle to ever shake the two realms. Score: 0%
> Title: 9/10
> Description: 6/10
> Plot: 19.5/20
> Characterization: 20/20
> Grammar: 20/20
> enjoyment: 7/10 : The review 1. Title : 9/10
Honestly i gotta be real with you. if i were to scroll down the feed looking for a new story to read and i come across your title “The Fallen”, there's a 9/10 chance of me clicking on it.
The 90% chance of me clicking on it just from the title is because the word Fallen.
The theology of Fallen means to subject to sin or depravity, also as the word is a negative word which catches a person eye more than a positive word. The 10% chance of me not clicking on it as it is a very common title and it's not that unique.
2. Description : 6/10Description: 4/10 Forward:8/10 = 6/10
Your description made me think i was reading tags. If i to read this to you i'll just read fallen guardian, human orphan, and a great battle. That's because you didn't have enough information in your description. I understand that the guardian was wrongly accused and that the human was supposed to be a sacrifice, but that's all i know about characters. Overall there needs to be more information in your description and it needs to be ordered correctly.
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