Nice and Straight

Red String

The grass tickled my arms and legs as the breeze gently swayed. I opened my eyes and sat up, giggling. There it was again. The red string. It was so calm, so serene, so beautiful. I raised my stubby child arms, reaching out. My sausage fingers slipped right through the red line, prohibiting me from grasping it. I stood up, entangling my hands with the mesmerizing red light and ambled along until I reached the end. The line slanted diagonally as a hand rested on my head. Following the string, my eyes landed on my mother's smiling face.

"Hello little princess."

Suddenly the other end began rising as I felt myself ascending. I turned my head to face my father laughing.

"There's my cute little angel. Give daddy a kiss?" I frowned, turning towards my mother in disgust.

"Ew your face is scratchy!" The string bounced along with me as my father fell into hearty laughter followed by my mother. At this very moment, the string maintained its serene glow, exuding a calming aura. It looked joyful and exuberant, just like my parents.

It was nice and straight.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


a/n

this took longer to write than it should have.

-K.o

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Bomi's letter to Eunji hnnng this was really intense for me to write hope you guys enjoy 04/27

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Myeonsshi
#1
Chapter 9: Recently, I've been absorbed in the idea of seeing red strings. So I searched and found this fanfic (thank goodness it's an Eunji fanfic). And wow. It's beautifully described here. This is really awesome.
Siskatiska
#2
Chapter 15: He..He..Your writing style and how you come up with this story and the process ..Is genius but funny..Love it..Please don't hybernate..Or dissapear too long...You have the skill as talented writer... I'm envy you..Keep the good job!!
asdfghjkyubutt
#3
Chapter 14: Holy mama Actually this is quite d*pressing but omg hoorah for you for completing this story with a great ending!! ;_; also i got kind of /mindblown/ with your a/n lmao this is too great i swear
Siskatiska
#4
Chapter 14: It's wonderful story..And how you make each title as main title...And each member represent here..It's smart..
The end is tragic but it's your story..And you know the best...I will assume she got save in the end.
Siskatiska
#5
Chapter 13: I think Eunji can't see her own string..That's why she assume she wasn't fate with anyone.
It's my guess..He.he..But..You are very good writer..I love this story.
I'm not familiar with BTOB members..But I know they are fun group.
Maribella #6
Chapter 13: Ooh... so it will be an end
It seems like Eunji lived in complicated life...
This question come across my mind...... is english your 1st language???
asdfghjkyubutt
#7
Chapter 13: I almost can't believe my eyes when I read 'the next chapter will be the last chapter' jsjdhjshd why did you do this to me I obviously didn't get enough ;__; lmao jk i love your story so much
Siskatiska
#8
Chapter 11: This story very smart and unusual..You did a great job..It's must be a burden for her to see all the mess up string..She will lost hope in love..
asdfghjkyubutt
#9
Chapter 10: Two updates in less than 24 hours ;_; I just want you to know I'm beyond happy!! ;; aww flustered sungjae had no idea with the sudden emotions outbreak and poor eunji she had a lot of things going on inside her head huhu let me just wait for the continuation of their date~
Siskatiska
#10
Chapter 9: Great meaningful chapter