the first date

Falling for One-Date Guy
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The funny thing about this first date thing is that after a month, it still hasn’t happened.

 

Sure. They are used to not seeing each other for months… but they planned a first date and she’s frustrated that it’s still. not. happening.

 

In Minhyuk’s defense, he texted her as soon as he got home after dropping her off. They set the date, the place, and the time. December 23 at 1:00 in the afternoon.

 

The original plan: drive to the amusement park, secure an all-day pass, eat dinner and watch the fireworks. Krystal loved the idea. Nothing thrills her as much as the thought of riding the roller coaster.

 

But… she forgot one thing.

 

A week before, Krystal woke up to see Jessica eating toast and scrolling through her phone at breakfast. (The fact that Jessica is awake this early puzzles Krystal, too.)

 

Jessica puts her phone down and looks at Krystal. “Good morning. You’re okay with driving us to grandma’s, right?”

 

Krystal nods. A 4-hour ride isn’t that bad, as long as they avoid the traffic jam.

 

“Hold on a minute! On the 24th? No. You know I don’t have patience for traffic jams.”

Jessica raises her eyebrow and her head. “What are you talking about? We’re leaving on the 23rd. Grandma’s expecting us to arrive by the 23rd. Sheesh so forgetful.”

 

December 23… can it be…

 

“No! No! Are you sure? Oh no.” Krystal’s shaking her head, closing her eyes as she tries to remember.

“Yes! You suggested it in the first place!” Right. She did. Right after her parents asked if she could drive them. This happened before she made plans with Minhyuk.

 

“Did you have other plans?”

Jessica’s voice is gentle now, expressing concern for her little sister who is having an internal panic attack at the moment.

 

“I was supposed to go on my first date with Minhyuk,” she said with a voice just above a whisper but Jessica heard her loud and clear.

 

Jessica doesn't say anything but her facial expression shows a mischievous smirk and concerned eyes.

 

“Can’t you reschedule?”

 

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The next plan: Amusement Park. December 30 at 1:00 PM.

 

Everything’s ready. But…

 

12-29-16

Minhyuk (6:57 PM) sis is sick and has to rest. driving my relatives around town tomorrow. sorry T_T

Minhyuk (6:58 PM) how about jan 2?

 

Krystal sighs. This is bad. Too much anticipation is bad. Jessica side-eyes her.

Krystal answers her sister’s unspoken question. “Date’s still not happening.”

“That’s alright, sis. Decemb

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HotPotatoSweetPotato #1
Chapter 8: This is the cutest thing. Just the right amount of fluff, the emotions are spot on. The flow is smooth, nowhere too dragging. All that you said about this being your first multi-chapter etc you did really well. 🎉
missmatilda
#2
Chapter 8: So sweet.. how i wish it was longer.. Thank you for a nice short read authornim. i love it.
000521
#3
oh my god ; ;; ;
Anding2810 #4
Chapter 8: Fluffy and cute, simply love it ❤️
FEBRUARY24 #5
Chapter 8: There is not so much Hyukstal story nowadays so I rarely check the tag and I end up missing this one. I like this one, short and sweet. The fact that it's a close up of real life events make me love it more. I'll surely be waiting for your fic in the future. Thanks for this amazing fic.
alammonayan
#6
Chapter 8: Awww.... it already comes to its end... im gonna miss hyukstal as ur characters... xD although it seems too fast... i like its ending and i like how u just captured a part of their life where they met and how they fall in love... i like the way how u not elaborate much on the story and gives ur reader the imagination on what happened on their dates but it also frustrates me because i want to read hyukstal stories... :( anyway thank you for this hyukstal ff... i hope ull write abt them in the near future... xD fighting! :)
valierrie
#7
Chapter 7: This is the best short chapter i have ever encounter.
First, the fact that minhyuk feels like kang minhyuk in real life is all over the place. Especially where he confessed about him ask Luna for a permission. I can fell that minhyuk will do that too to soojung if they're really dating. Not so shy and very playful indeed.

And soojung is just adorably cute. Her inner thoughts brought a fresh feeling throughout the entire story. Because she's insecure about this popular dude. Can she manage to keep a straight face is he's becoming unexpected. The soojung here is my favorite
tartytorts
#8
Chapter 7: Ok I started reading this today and I loveeeeee this story. Your chapters a short (please make them a bit longer) but your story pacing is on point!!
I love the characters that you have created:D
Btw what does he mean by the one date guy and permission to date? I didn't get that part.
Also a little suggestions to make your awesome chapters even better, try to separate dialogues from sentences so they make better sense in the context.
alammonayan
#9
Chapter 7: Hahaha... i like how minhyuk teases krystal abt the nickname she gave to him.... xD and lunas slip of the tongue... xD i also like guys who ask for permission from ur friends to go out with u because its much more less hassle... xD i mean if ur frwnds so u together with this guy theyll constantly nag you abt him but when the guy ask permission from ur squad thats it... hahaha... xD thank you and will wait for the nxt chapter... xD