confusion and shock

Falling for One-Date Guy
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Krystal’s getting used to it. This has been her routine for the longest time. Clock in at 8AM, work, often overtime then commute home. No spontaneous plans, and definitely, no one waiting for her outside her office.

 

She leaves work a little later than usual and sees a familiar car parked not too far away. She stops on her tracks, puzzled, then eventually shrugs the idea and convinces herself that she’s imagining things. She walks again and nearly drops her things when she sees who’s standing by the entrance. He’s leaning with his back against the wall, one foot propped up behind him. He has earphones and sunglasses on. He turns to her and she stares.

 

“What are you doing here?” Krystal asks, ignoring the crowd of her officemates looking and whispering as they pass by.

“I’m waiting for someone… You work here, too?” Minhyuk says in a serious tone, but with a smirk on his face.

Krystal isn’t amused and repeats the question.

“Kidding. Waiting for you, of course. Come on.” and he walks towards his car, like it’s normal, as if they haven’t just cut off any form of communication for a month and 5 days (Krystal denies counting), unless mutual likes on instagram count as communication.

 

He proceeds to the driver’s seat. He doesn’t open the door for her, he never does, but he doesn't turn on the engine, doesn’t move, until she’s settled in the passenger’s seat. She follows him and enters the car without a reason. She sits, with so many questions in her mind. She begins with the simplest one.

“Where are we going?”

She sees him scrunch his forehead before answering.

“I really don’t have a plan. Do you want to watch a movie?”

“Okay…”

 

She’s confused. If she had a hundred questions upon entering the car, she has thousands now, because Minhyuk is awfully quiet during the 15-minute drive, with his brows knitted together, and a serious, no, nervous, look on his face.

 

Okay, so she chose the movie, an indie film about love and heartbreak. It has good reviews and deserves more attention. She’s sure she would have loved it, if she weren’t feeling cold and distracted by Minhyuk’s behavior right now. He’s staring at the screen, but his mind seems elsewhere. Despite this, he takes Krystal’s hands with both of his when he notices that her thin shawl isn’t enough to keep her warm. He’s apologetic for being the cause. It was his idea to watch the movie without warning in the first place.

 

She definitely has millions of questions now. They watch until half the credits before they stand and walk down the cinema aisle. Without a word, Minhyuk takes Krystal’s hands and intertwines their fingers. Her heart skips a beat. She squeezes his hand just lightly, relishing the feeling of their hands as a perfect fit. They walk without looking at each other.

 

He lets go of her hand. For a second, she feels disappointed, before realizing they’re near his car. As usual, he sits in the driver’s seat while Krystal climbs to the passenger seat. He looks more stoic than ever, not even bothering to put his keys in the ignition. He probably feels the weight of Krystal’s stare… because Krystal finally has the courage to ask, to start questionin

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HotPotatoSweetPotato #1
Chapter 8: This is the cutest thing. Just the right amount of fluff, the emotions are spot on. The flow is smooth, nowhere too dragging. All that you said about this being your first multi-chapter etc you did really well. 🎉
missmatilda
#2
Chapter 8: So sweet.. how i wish it was longer.. Thank you for a nice short read authornim. i love it.
000521
#3
oh my god ; ;; ;
Anding2810 #4
Chapter 8: Fluffy and cute, simply love it ❤️
FEBRUARY24 #5
Chapter 8: There is not so much Hyukstal story nowadays so I rarely check the tag and I end up missing this one. I like this one, short and sweet. The fact that it's a close up of real life events make me love it more. I'll surely be waiting for your fic in the future. Thanks for this amazing fic.
alammonayan
#6
Chapter 8: Awww.... it already comes to its end... im gonna miss hyukstal as ur characters... xD although it seems too fast... i like its ending and i like how u just captured a part of their life where they met and how they fall in love... i like the way how u not elaborate much on the story and gives ur reader the imagination on what happened on their dates but it also frustrates me because i want to read hyukstal stories... :( anyway thank you for this hyukstal ff... i hope ull write abt them in the near future... xD fighting! :)
valierrie
#7
Chapter 7: This is the best short chapter i have ever encounter.
First, the fact that minhyuk feels like kang minhyuk in real life is all over the place. Especially where he confessed about him ask Luna for a permission. I can fell that minhyuk will do that too to soojung if they're really dating. Not so shy and very playful indeed.

And soojung is just adorably cute. Her inner thoughts brought a fresh feeling throughout the entire story. Because she's insecure about this popular dude. Can she manage to keep a straight face is he's becoming unexpected. The soojung here is my favorite
tartytorts
#8
Chapter 7: Ok I started reading this today and I loveeeeee this story. Your chapters a short (please make them a bit longer) but your story pacing is on point!!
I love the characters that you have created:D
Btw what does he mean by the one date guy and permission to date? I didn't get that part.
Also a little suggestions to make your awesome chapters even better, try to separate dialogues from sentences so they make better sense in the context.
alammonayan
#9
Chapter 7: Hahaha... i like how minhyuk teases krystal abt the nickname she gave to him.... xD and lunas slip of the tongue... xD i also like guys who ask for permission from ur friends to go out with u because its much more less hassle... xD i mean if ur frwnds so u together with this guy theyll constantly nag you abt him but when the guy ask permission from ur squad thats it... hahaha... xD thank you and will wait for the nxt chapter... xD