97MIYOUNG TEASER

   SOULART (apply now!)
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Author's Notes 'lo to my readers. So this is on the late side but I hope you were amused anyways. I have the sad news that Ella was literally the only on-time applicant. Makes me sad. But at least I already gained another applicant. (Thanks Soony.) Anyways, this chapter was harder to decide on what to write. I had already used the playing for other cliche for my own teaser and then Xana's was the light-hearted amusing one. This is where this one ended up. Enjoy. -Soul Wow look our first applicant's teaser!!!! See what you guys get to look forward to? ♡♡♡ so cool right??? :) hurry so we can do wonderful things with all of our characters! -xana . . . 97miyoung Teaser: My younger brother is rude. . Ella Park and Vernon Park . She was going to throw it out the window.    Yup, today was the day.   This was utterly ridiculous and completely unfair. How was she supposed to prove that the two sides were equal? There was no way to convert cos x to sin x with that tan2 x in the way. This was utterly ridiculous. Algebra and geometry and all the other ugly maths had not prepared her for trigonometry.   Nope.   Forget this.   She shoved the book off of her bed, the mass dragging her notebook down along the way. Her pencil rolled off slowly and she followed it with her eyes until it landed on her textbook, the lead making a stray mark coincidentally right through the question she had been stuck on. She huffed, crossing her arms.    "Mimi? What in the world?"    She looked up, spotting her brother in the doorway. She rolled her eyes and stared pointedly at the mess until he understood. He whistled, jokingly impressed.    "I'm sure the book stood no chance," he teased, walking around the pile and flopping on her bed.   "Shut up Vernon," she complained, shoving him lightly. He lost his balance but regained it almost immediately, cackling at her misfortune.    "Well what's your plan now?" he asked casually, practically draping himself over her lap.    "Mourn my lack of math abilities," she answered, half kidding as she laid back on the mountain of pillows on her bed.    "Oh hey, wasn't today the update for that game you really liked?" he reminded, straightening up. She thought about the date (being dependent on her phone for the day was probably not a good thing) and finally sat up, nearly throwing Vernon off of her in her haste.    "Yeeesssss," she con
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chanseowoon
#1
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YukiRyuu
#2
Chapter 14: "Don't worry, I'll only make him wish I did."
YES YES YES Y E S WHAT A LINE I LOVE THIS.
XANA, SOUL, YOU WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL HUMAN BEINGS
YukiRyuu
#3
Chapter 14: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*unintelligible screaming*
*lots of it*
Kupuritama
#4
Chapter 12: Ahaha- I commented on the teaser for Yongwoon/Vestia but bypassed this because I needed to pass out last night. ;;
But !! This was such a cute and interesting introduction to the established characters through the event of an actual introduction in the story. Aaron seems like such a sweetheart- even if he seems to be stuck playing wrangler/generalized guide atm for the mish mash of people coming into Allied Heart lmAO. The subtleties between Wonjun and Taekwoon being unraveled through the eyes of Aaron was certainly an amusing trail to follow throughout this. I adore your writing- even with the shortest of appearances, you really give a solid feeling of distinction to each character to make them seem familiar (which could be from the perspective the writing is in since I suppose since even if it is in 3rd person perspective, Aaron was definitely the one directing the flow along with Wonjun, Taekwoon, and then later Yoichi once he popped up.) I'm not making much sense lol, sorry for my babbling. ;; __ ;;
rojeulite
#5
Chapter 13: OH MY GOD- i was so surprised to see this updated but it's so nice to know you haven't forgotten this! ; u ;
and it's almost a year and i still haven't finished my app- woops. i saw this and i was worried i deleted it, glad i still have it. if you allow me, i can start working on it again.
but that aside, it's so nice to have you guys back again!
YukiRyuu
#6
Chapter 13: I have a lot of feelings
Kupuritama
#7
Chapter 13: I high key screamed when I saw Soulart in my updated subscription feed. ;; u ;;
I'll reply to this once I read the teaser but your A/N reminded me of a previous applyfic that wrote my character's teaser in the perspective of the people around him!

Also! Lol, I had set it to friends only, but I've made my app public again!
YukiRyuu
#8
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review!! I totally understand the changes you need to make to the app!! I can see Aisha occasionally having a shorter temper especially when it comes to competition so that's completely ok!! I didn't have a very good grasp of the timeline anyways so I understand if you need to adjust! Thank you :)
Kupuritama
#9
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review! LOL- I had the most giant brain fart I know about the heights and noticed that even before turning it in BUT FORGOT TO EDIT IT LMAO I I'M SORRY. Yeah, he was a beta tester, but unlike most of the other players, he kind of went too hard too fast?? He ended up burning himself out on the game and kind of dropped it for a while. As for the account transferring, he is just very indulgent, so if his gf at the time expresses interest in something he will go out of his way to make it happen- in those cases, his higher level accounts made gameplay easier so he was okay with it over if his gf was happy. :')
He and his ex don't really talk much. It's not for bad reasons, the two don't really share much of the same interest anymore. After the update, he did send an in game message to his old account though.
Funny story, in Final Fantasy Online I don't really like the Bard class- which is what I based a good amount of this app on. (since the races are from there too. lol) I'm not one for support classes since I at monitoring others and as such I am usually delegated to one of the DPS positions. ;; As for the secondary healing, I apologize since that was more of an offhanded assumption on my part with the skill sets from Final Fantasy Online- specifically one called "Second Wind" that is a healing skill available to most classes since you can switch classes and level up skills from their skill trees. (I can definitely remove it! But I noticed that you mentioned switching classes was permissible in SOULART too- even if the switching of classes is not recommended, the option could open up possibilities for cross class compatible skills that may be weaker in comparison to the main skills denoted for each class- basically secondary skills.) But basically I was pretty dumb and drew that connection without seeking clarification so I can remove it if you want! I'm getting worried about the length of this so I'll cont. in a reply to this. Lmao-
Soonyangel
#10
It's starting woohoo ! I'm super excited c: