MYSOUL TEASER

   SOULART (apply now!)
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AUTHOR'S NOTES Soul here!  A sneak peek into how my character (Eve) begins playing SOULART. It's also a look into my writing style. Hopefully it doesn't put you off too much. I'm thinking about doing a teaser for every applicant, just a vignette on how they began playing the game or perhaps a look into how they know Allied Heart (perhaps both). Let me know what you guys think. Please and thank you. -Soul *Jazz Hands* I'm assuming this space is for me ;) Sup! Xana here :3 I hope you like Soul's character + her brother (such a sad chapter, am I right?). The sadness is real. Be ready for more awesome writing from Soul. Comments are loved <3  -Xana . . . . . MySoul Teaser: My soul is yours. . Eve Gardener and Aaron Gardener . There was a moment of silence, a breath between one second and the next in which the atmosphere seemed to suspend in between dimensions.    "Eve!" he whispered in horror, voice drowned by the sudden rush of sound - Dr. Park shouting to prep the operation room! stat! just over the shrill ring of the receptionist's telephone and the multitude of undiscernable conversations in the hallways - because the moment of silence was broken beyond repair, but she could still hear his cry ring in her heart.    She knew him, knew the way his lips formed over her name from years of sharing space with an ease that fascinated others. She loved him, loved his laugh and smile even though they weren't present at the moment. In a way, she was him, was him in the ways that it mattered, because she knew the moment her name left his lips, that he would try to slip away.    Sure enough, he turned to the orderly pushing his wheelchair, mouth moving a mile a minute, and
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chanseowoon
#1
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YukiRyuu
#2
Chapter 14: "Don't worry, I'll only make him wish I did."
YES YES YES Y E S WHAT A LINE I LOVE THIS.
XANA, SOUL, YOU WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL HUMAN BEINGS
YukiRyuu
#3
Chapter 14: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*unintelligible screaming*
*lots of it*
Kupuritama
#4
Chapter 12: Ahaha- I commented on the teaser for Yongwoon/Vestia but bypassed this because I needed to pass out last night. ;;
But !! This was such a cute and interesting introduction to the established characters through the event of an actual introduction in the story. Aaron seems like such a sweetheart- even if he seems to be stuck playing wrangler/generalized guide atm for the mish mash of people coming into Allied Heart lmAO. The subtleties between Wonjun and Taekwoon being unraveled through the eyes of Aaron was certainly an amusing trail to follow throughout this. I adore your writing- even with the shortest of appearances, you really give a solid feeling of distinction to each character to make them seem familiar (which could be from the perspective the writing is in since I suppose since even if it is in 3rd person perspective, Aaron was definitely the one directing the flow along with Wonjun, Taekwoon, and then later Yoichi once he popped up.) I'm not making much sense lol, sorry for my babbling. ;; __ ;;
rojeulite
#5
Chapter 13: OH MY GOD- i was so surprised to see this updated but it's so nice to know you haven't forgotten this! ; u ;
and it's almost a year and i still haven't finished my app- woops. i saw this and i was worried i deleted it, glad i still have it. if you allow me, i can start working on it again.
but that aside, it's so nice to have you guys back again!
YukiRyuu
#6
Chapter 13: I have a lot of feelings
Kupuritama
#7
Chapter 13: I high key screamed when I saw Soulart in my updated subscription feed. ;; u ;;
I'll reply to this once I read the teaser but your A/N reminded me of a previous applyfic that wrote my character's teaser in the perspective of the people around him!

Also! Lol, I had set it to friends only, but I've made my app public again!
YukiRyuu
#8
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review!! I totally understand the changes you need to make to the app!! I can see Aisha occasionally having a shorter temper especially when it comes to competition so that's completely ok!! I didn't have a very good grasp of the timeline anyways so I understand if you need to adjust! Thank you :)
Kupuritama
#9
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review! LOL- I had the most giant brain fart I know about the heights and noticed that even before turning it in BUT FORGOT TO EDIT IT LMAO I I'M SORRY. Yeah, he was a beta tester, but unlike most of the other players, he kind of went too hard too fast?? He ended up burning himself out on the game and kind of dropped it for a while. As for the account transferring, he is just very indulgent, so if his gf at the time expresses interest in something he will go out of his way to make it happen- in those cases, his higher level accounts made gameplay easier so he was okay with it over if his gf was happy. :')
He and his ex don't really talk much. It's not for bad reasons, the two don't really share much of the same interest anymore. After the update, he did send an in game message to his old account though.
Funny story, in Final Fantasy Online I don't really like the Bard class- which is what I based a good amount of this app on. (since the races are from there too. lol) I'm not one for support classes since I at monitoring others and as such I am usually delegated to one of the DPS positions. ;; As for the secondary healing, I apologize since that was more of an offhanded assumption on my part with the skill sets from Final Fantasy Online- specifically one called "Second Wind" that is a healing skill available to most classes since you can switch classes and level up skills from their skill trees. (I can definitely remove it! But I noticed that you mentioned switching classes was permissible in SOULART too- even if the switching of classes is not recommended, the option could open up possibilities for cross class compatible skills that may be weaker in comparison to the main skills denoted for each class- basically secondary skills.) But basically I was pretty dumb and drew that connection without seeking clarification so I can remove it if you want! I'm getting worried about the length of this so I'll cont. in a reply to this. Lmao-
Soonyangel
#10
It's starting woohoo ! I'm super excited c: