VESTIASCOCEN TEASER

   SOULART (apply now!)
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Author's Notes Morning gamers. Here's a teaser for the next character. Vestia's app was just very beautiful and gave me a lot of feelings. I decided to try something different and write something that focused on the other characters from Yongwoon's life. I hope you enjoy it and here's an in advance apology to Kupuritama because I'm sure you expected Yongwoon to be the main in this chapter, but I got struck with inspiration and felt like writing something more angsty. -Soul P.S. Can Vestia's app be visible for me to see again? If not, this lovely character can't be written more about. I know it's late since I last published, but I would never abandon my story without word, so at least let me know if you're withdrawing your app? Please and thank you. damn son get rekt. MY POOR HEART LIKE DAMN WHY U DOIN THIS TO ME US!!!!! Also please come back to us T _ T I hafta see how this plays out. My poor heart 3 -xana . VestiaScocen Teaser: It's your (my) fault. . Park Jinae Lim Yejin and Lim Yongwoon . Her knuckles were white and her breath came in short bursts. Her pulse screamed in her veins and her eyes burned with unshed tears.   But she wasn't going to give her the satisfaction.   She pursed her lips, taking a deep breath to calm herself like she did when her students tested her patience - like ten buckets of paint devolving into a paint war in the middle of the computer lab.   "I'm going to pretend you didn't say that, Jinae," she finally stated, successfully keeping her voice from quivering and turning away from the female.    "You're kidding, Yejin," Jinae snorted, waving her hand wildly. "Are you seriously going to ignore me? Don't you understand what you've done? Who you've done it to?"   She bit her bottom lip and kept her gaze on the floor, on the pair of sneakers haphazardly left on the floor. She followed the curve of its laces, counting silently in her head. One. Two.   "Yejin, have you no shame?" Jinae demanded, stomping on the ground.   She in a sharp breath. Four. Five.   "Yejin, I'm talking to you!" Jinae shouted, one hand reaching out with rage and hurt and fury.   She was tense and when the hand came upon her shoulder, she shrugged it off roughly. Seven; no, eight. Right?   "Leave me alone, Jinae," she requested, voice catching only once. Ten.   "So that you can pretend you're more sane than you are?" Jinae mocked,
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chanseowoon
#1
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YukiRyuu
#2
Chapter 14: "Don't worry, I'll only make him wish I did."
YES YES YES Y E S WHAT A LINE I LOVE THIS.
XANA, SOUL, YOU WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL HUMAN BEINGS
YukiRyuu
#3
Chapter 14: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*unintelligible screaming*
*lots of it*
Kupuritama
#4
Chapter 12: Ahaha- I commented on the teaser for Yongwoon/Vestia but bypassed this because I needed to pass out last night. ;;
But !! This was such a cute and interesting introduction to the established characters through the event of an actual introduction in the story. Aaron seems like such a sweetheart- even if he seems to be stuck playing wrangler/generalized guide atm for the mish mash of people coming into Allied Heart lmAO. The subtleties between Wonjun and Taekwoon being unraveled through the eyes of Aaron was certainly an amusing trail to follow throughout this. I adore your writing- even with the shortest of appearances, you really give a solid feeling of distinction to each character to make them seem familiar (which could be from the perspective the writing is in since I suppose since even if it is in 3rd person perspective, Aaron was definitely the one directing the flow along with Wonjun, Taekwoon, and then later Yoichi once he popped up.) I'm not making much sense lol, sorry for my babbling. ;; __ ;;
rojeulite
#5
Chapter 13: OH MY GOD- i was so surprised to see this updated but it's so nice to know you haven't forgotten this! ; u ;
and it's almost a year and i still haven't finished my app- woops. i saw this and i was worried i deleted it, glad i still have it. if you allow me, i can start working on it again.
but that aside, it's so nice to have you guys back again!
YukiRyuu
#6
Chapter 13: I have a lot of feelings
Kupuritama
#7
Chapter 13: I high key screamed when I saw Soulart in my updated subscription feed. ;; u ;;
I'll reply to this once I read the teaser but your A/N reminded me of a previous applyfic that wrote my character's teaser in the perspective of the people around him!

Also! Lol, I had set it to friends only, but I've made my app public again!
YukiRyuu
#8
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review!! I totally understand the changes you need to make to the app!! I can see Aisha occasionally having a shorter temper especially when it comes to competition so that's completely ok!! I didn't have a very good grasp of the timeline anyways so I understand if you need to adjust! Thank you :)
Kupuritama
#9
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review! LOL- I had the most giant brain fart I know about the heights and noticed that even before turning it in BUT FORGOT TO EDIT IT LMAO I I'M SORRY. Yeah, he was a beta tester, but unlike most of the other players, he kind of went too hard too fast?? He ended up burning himself out on the game and kind of dropped it for a while. As for the account transferring, he is just very indulgent, so if his gf at the time expresses interest in something he will go out of his way to make it happen- in those cases, his higher level accounts made gameplay easier so he was okay with it over if his gf was happy. :')
He and his ex don't really talk much. It's not for bad reasons, the two don't really share much of the same interest anymore. After the update, he did send an in game message to his old account though.
Funny story, in Final Fantasy Online I don't really like the Bard class- which is what I based a good amount of this app on. (since the races are from there too. lol) I'm not one for support classes since I at monitoring others and as such I am usually delegated to one of the DPS positions. ;; As for the secondary healing, I apologize since that was more of an offhanded assumption on my part with the skill sets from Final Fantasy Online- specifically one called "Second Wind" that is a healing skill available to most classes since you can switch classes and level up skills from their skill trees. (I can definitely remove it! But I noticed that you mentioned switching classes was permissible in SOULART too- even if the switching of classes is not recommended, the option could open up possibilities for cross class compatible skills that may be weaker in comparison to the main skills denoted for each class- basically secondary skills.) But basically I was pretty dumb and drew that connection without seeking clarification so I can remove it if you want! I'm getting worried about the length of this so I'll cont. in a reply to this. Lmao-
Soonyangel
#10
It's starting woohoo ! I'm super excited c: