WAITLIST FOR SOULART

   SOULART (apply now!)
Please log in to read the full chapter
KEY Key:  Chosen Already - joined Allied Heart Accepted - logged in To-Be-Reviewed - is loading Errors - is offline CHARACTER STATISTICS Race: Humans - 3 Elves - 2 Lalafell - 1 Miqo'te - 3 Roegadyn - 0 AuRa - 3 . Beta Tester Ratio: Beta - 4 / 6 . Base Classes: Barbarian: 0 Fighter: 1  Lancer: 2  Archer: 3 Thief: 0 White Mage: 1 Black Mage: 0 Arcanist: 1 . Advanced Classes: Bard: 2 Ninja: 1 Dragoon: 0 Monk: 1 Paladin: 1 King's Knight: 1 Dark Knight: 0 Scholar: 1 Sage: 0 Dark Magician: 0 Songstress: 1 . WAITLIST MySoul joined Allied Heart . Name: Eve Gardener Faceclaim: Emma Watson Love Interest: Applicant // Elizabeth Olsen . Review:  Soul: This is my character. Please enjoy the beauty that is Emma Watson and obviously, you don't need to put as much detail into it as I did. (It's part of my writing process for me so it was helpful.) Anyways, she still has her beauties and faults but hopefully you guys like her. She's going to be a good tradeperson.   Xana: ... xanaflex joined Allied Heart . Name: Yoichi Watanabe Faceclaim: Lee Jongsuk Love Interest: Jang Yijeong (HISTORY) . Review: Soul: This is Xana's character. He's absolutely adorable (and sad, so sad) but also within the top three of the players of SOULART. (If you're under the top three - aka most if not all of you - you better not surpass this level!) I'm super excited to write about him though I don't know if I can do this kid justice.    Xana: ... 97miyoung joined Allied Heart . Name: Ella Miyoung Park Faceclaim: Jeon Somi (IOI) Love Interest: Song Kyungil (HISTORY) . Review: Soul: Hey Miyoung. Thanks for the lovely application. I love where her nickname came from and her fashion sense is so cute. Her family gives me all the warm fuzzies. If you could write down the faceclaims for your family on your application, that'd be awesome of you. I am very amused by George (his moustache is the most adorable thing ever) and her love of flowers is just too cute. Her typing style gives me life. Honestly. (Though I'm actually bad at typing like that.) The relationship with Kyungil is A+ because it's the fluffiest thing ever. It will be a good contrast amidst the evilness that is SOULART's update and I'm super excited to write about it. There are some things that will be changed to match the actual plot, just to warn you, but otherwise awesome application. Thank you for applying and I will see you in my story. As the only application on time, you are automatically accepted. Reminding you again that I will probably have to make some changes but I hope you don't mind. I can't wait to write about Ella! (She's so cute.)   Xana: sup bruh, how's it going? :P Your character is super cute in basically every way. Everything is so fluffy and adorable it's so great. YEEEEE VERNON THE QT PIE <3 Wow you're so punny with the hansol/onesol thing. Why is ur mom dead? rip. A gamer at heart yay how cute. YOU AND KYUNGIL ARE SO MUSHI I CANNOT OMFG. Also thank you for using Kyungil what a bae. Your character is all flowery omg it's too cute like im throwing up rainbows. Also your cactuar has a stache. OMG YAY you wrote me into your app <3 bae. I love everything <3 Thank you for applying! If there's anything wrong, Soul talked about it already. SkysHades joined Allied Heart . Name: Seo Wonjun Faceclaim: Kim Wonsik aka Ravi (VIXX) Love Interest: Jung Taekwoon aka Leo (VIXX) . Review: Soul:  Hey Soony! Thanks so much for your application. I'll go right into the review. He's such a cutie and I love how he's so social and flirty (but respectably flirty.) I have to admit I don't understand the Dom Juan nickname all that much. Is that a reference to something? His background is crazy and it's nice that he knows exactly what he wants to do with his life.
Please log in to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
chanseowoon
#1
the source code is empty.
YukiRyuu
#2
Chapter 14: "Don't worry, I'll only make him wish I did."
YES YES YES Y E S WHAT A LINE I LOVE THIS.
XANA, SOUL, YOU WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL HUMAN BEINGS
YukiRyuu
#3
Chapter 14: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*unintelligible screaming*
*lots of it*
Kupuritama
#4
Chapter 12: Ahaha- I commented on the teaser for Yongwoon/Vestia but bypassed this because I needed to pass out last night. ;;
But !! This was such a cute and interesting introduction to the established characters through the event of an actual introduction in the story. Aaron seems like such a sweetheart- even if he seems to be stuck playing wrangler/generalized guide atm for the mish mash of people coming into Allied Heart lmAO. The subtleties between Wonjun and Taekwoon being unraveled through the eyes of Aaron was certainly an amusing trail to follow throughout this. I adore your writing- even with the shortest of appearances, you really give a solid feeling of distinction to each character to make them seem familiar (which could be from the perspective the writing is in since I suppose since even if it is in 3rd person perspective, Aaron was definitely the one directing the flow along with Wonjun, Taekwoon, and then later Yoichi once he popped up.) I'm not making much sense lol, sorry for my babbling. ;; __ ;;
rojeulite
#5
Chapter 13: OH MY GOD- i was so surprised to see this updated but it's so nice to know you haven't forgotten this! ; u ;
and it's almost a year and i still haven't finished my app- woops. i saw this and i was worried i deleted it, glad i still have it. if you allow me, i can start working on it again.
but that aside, it's so nice to have you guys back again!
YukiRyuu
#6
Chapter 13: I have a lot of feelings
Kupuritama
#7
Chapter 13: I high key screamed when I saw Soulart in my updated subscription feed. ;; u ;;
I'll reply to this once I read the teaser but your A/N reminded me of a previous applyfic that wrote my character's teaser in the perspective of the people around him!

Also! Lol, I had set it to friends only, but I've made my app public again!
YukiRyuu
#8
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review!! I totally understand the changes you need to make to the app!! I can see Aisha occasionally having a shorter temper especially when it comes to competition so that's completely ok!! I didn't have a very good grasp of the timeline anyways so I understand if you need to adjust! Thank you :)
Kupuritama
#9
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review! LOL- I had the most giant brain fart I know about the heights and noticed that even before turning it in BUT FORGOT TO EDIT IT LMAO I I'M SORRY. Yeah, he was a beta tester, but unlike most of the other players, he kind of went too hard too fast?? He ended up burning himself out on the game and kind of dropped it for a while. As for the account transferring, he is just very indulgent, so if his gf at the time expresses interest in something he will go out of his way to make it happen- in those cases, his higher level accounts made gameplay easier so he was okay with it over if his gf was happy. :')
He and his ex don't really talk much. It's not for bad reasons, the two don't really share much of the same interest anymore. After the update, he did send an in game message to his old account though.
Funny story, in Final Fantasy Online I don't really like the Bard class- which is what I based a good amount of this app on. (since the races are from there too. lol) I'm not one for support classes since I at monitoring others and as such I am usually delegated to one of the DPS positions. ;; As for the secondary healing, I apologize since that was more of an offhanded assumption on my part with the skill sets from Final Fantasy Online- specifically one called "Second Wind" that is a healing skill available to most classes since you can switch classes and level up skills from their skill trees. (I can definitely remove it! But I noticed that you mentioned switching classes was permissible in SOULART too- even if the switching of classes is not recommended, the option could open up possibilities for cross class compatible skills that may be weaker in comparison to the main skills denoted for each class- basically secondary skills.) But basically I was pretty dumb and drew that connection without seeking clarification so I can remove it if you want! I'm getting worried about the length of this so I'll cont. in a reply to this. Lmao-
Soonyangel
#10
It's starting woohoo ! I'm super excited c: