GUARDIAN TEASER

   SOULART (apply now!)
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Author's Notes Hi friends. Here's the final player teaser (for the applicants so far anyways). Hope you enjoyed Aisha putting this resident-loser jerkface in his place. It was entertaining to write. The second part was written with the help of Xana. She pointed out how I introduce Aisha and Minho to the other characters, and I was sold, especially since none of the filler characters - namely the other residents / doctors and guards - have been introduced. They won't be major characters for the most part, mostly name drops of some actors / actresses and to move the plot along. Hope it's at least partially enlightening.   -Soul ASDFGHJKL Oh how i made ugly faces at the first half and fangirled at the second. :D How did you guys like the last (ish) teaser? Amazing right? Our resident I-dont-need-no-man trying not to actually kick people's asses hahaha. :3c Hope you guys enjoyed! -xana . . . Guardian Teaser: Guard your life. . Aisha Rao and Minho Choi . "Ish," came the absolute butchering of her name. She turned, a small box in her arms.    She spotted another resident - one of the newer ones who was still learning everyone's names - jogging up to her.   "Aisha," she corrected immediately. "Or Ash at the very least."   "Ash," he repeated, beaming. "Need a hand?"   "I'm fine," she excused, putting the box down on a nearby counter and putting a hand on her hip. "Need anything?"   "I wanted to ask if you wanted to grab dinner if you're free," the male requested, leaning on the counter as suavely as possible.    She blinked.   "Thanks for the offer bu-"   "Hey. No problem. I know it isn't easy trying to keep all this-" He gestured to the hospital. "-up while looking for a husband."   "Excuse you. I was talking," she snapped, shifting her weight. "As I was saying, thanks for the offer but no. I'm not looking to date anyone at the moment."   He blinked.   "Straight to marriage?" he guessed, looking her up and down. "I mean, I knew arranged marriages were still a thing, but I figured you'd like to get to know me a little first."   "Oh my Lord," she huffed, rolling her eyes. She glared. "Look. I don't want to date anyone. I'm currently not looking to get engaged or married. And if I ever do want to find
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chanseowoon
#1
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YukiRyuu
#2
Chapter 14: "Don't worry, I'll only make him wish I did."
YES YES YES Y E S WHAT A LINE I LOVE THIS.
XANA, SOUL, YOU WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL HUMAN BEINGS
YukiRyuu
#3
Chapter 14: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*unintelligible screaming*
*lots of it*
Kupuritama
#4
Chapter 12: Ahaha- I commented on the teaser for Yongwoon/Vestia but bypassed this because I needed to pass out last night. ;;
But !! This was such a cute and interesting introduction to the established characters through the event of an actual introduction in the story. Aaron seems like such a sweetheart- even if he seems to be stuck playing wrangler/generalized guide atm for the mish mash of people coming into Allied Heart lmAO. The subtleties between Wonjun and Taekwoon being unraveled through the eyes of Aaron was certainly an amusing trail to follow throughout this. I adore your writing- even with the shortest of appearances, you really give a solid feeling of distinction to each character to make them seem familiar (which could be from the perspective the writing is in since I suppose since even if it is in 3rd person perspective, Aaron was definitely the one directing the flow along with Wonjun, Taekwoon, and then later Yoichi once he popped up.) I'm not making much sense lol, sorry for my babbling. ;; __ ;;
rojeulite
#5
Chapter 13: OH MY GOD- i was so surprised to see this updated but it's so nice to know you haven't forgotten this! ; u ;
and it's almost a year and i still haven't finished my app- woops. i saw this and i was worried i deleted it, glad i still have it. if you allow me, i can start working on it again.
but that aside, it's so nice to have you guys back again!
YukiRyuu
#6
Chapter 13: I have a lot of feelings
Kupuritama
#7
Chapter 13: I high key screamed when I saw Soulart in my updated subscription feed. ;; u ;;
I'll reply to this once I read the teaser but your A/N reminded me of a previous applyfic that wrote my character's teaser in the perspective of the people around him!

Also! Lol, I had set it to friends only, but I've made my app public again!
YukiRyuu
#8
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review!! I totally understand the changes you need to make to the app!! I can see Aisha occasionally having a shorter temper especially when it comes to competition so that's completely ok!! I didn't have a very good grasp of the timeline anyways so I understand if you need to adjust! Thank you :)
Kupuritama
#9
Chapter 4: Thank you for the review! LOL- I had the most giant brain fart I know about the heights and noticed that even before turning it in BUT FORGOT TO EDIT IT LMAO I I'M SORRY. Yeah, he was a beta tester, but unlike most of the other players, he kind of went too hard too fast?? He ended up burning himself out on the game and kind of dropped it for a while. As for the account transferring, he is just very indulgent, so if his gf at the time expresses interest in something he will go out of his way to make it happen- in those cases, his higher level accounts made gameplay easier so he was okay with it over if his gf was happy. :')
He and his ex don't really talk much. It's not for bad reasons, the two don't really share much of the same interest anymore. After the update, he did send an in game message to his old account though.
Funny story, in Final Fantasy Online I don't really like the Bard class- which is what I based a good amount of this app on. (since the races are from there too. lol) I'm not one for support classes since I at monitoring others and as such I am usually delegated to one of the DPS positions. ;; As for the secondary healing, I apologize since that was more of an offhanded assumption on my part with the skill sets from Final Fantasy Online- specifically one called "Second Wind" that is a healing skill available to most classes since you can switch classes and level up skills from their skill trees. (I can definitely remove it! But I noticed that you mentioned switching classes was permissible in SOULART too- even if the switching of classes is not recommended, the option could open up possibilities for cross class compatible skills that may be weaker in comparison to the main skills denoted for each class- basically secondary skills.) But basically I was pretty dumb and drew that connection without seeking clarification so I can remove it if you want! I'm getting worried about the length of this so I'll cont. in a reply to this. Lmao-
Soonyangel
#10
It's starting woohoo ! I'm super excited c: