Nine:

On Immortality:

"Where's Sumin?"

Broken Korean shattered the peace of my afternoon.

I could hear her cousins in the yard.

"She was...

she has to stay..."

Murmers. They were unsure.

I slid open the door.

"Where is she?"

Benjamin turned to me.

"I'm sorry, I don't understand..."

He was on the verge of panic.

"She's not... at shop...

Soldiers... guns...

Communist die."

He struggled to find the right words.

"No one is at your shop."

He managed to piece together a sentence-

Korean here, some English there. 

"Not even her aunt and uncle?"

I heard the kids stop fidgeting.

"No one... But... there was a notice...

People going to... communist meetings...

They're going to die."

My heart jumped into my throat.

I understood.

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purplesparkles
#1
Chapter 18: Wow I really like your story, I was a bit confused at the beginning about the plot and everything but I got curious so I kept reading it. And I don't regret it at all, it's different from what I'm used to see or read here on aff and it feels good. So I really can't wait to read the rest of this story !! Good Luck on your exams.
helloMi #2
Chapter 17: Thanks for putting the note at the end of the chapter! It makes everything more clear now. I look forward to your next update :)
helloMi #3
Chapter 10: Really interesting story so far! I got confused as to who was talking in some parts but after re-reading if became more clear.
BAPworld
#4
Chapter 8: Great story author-nim :D, by the way, Youngjae already dead? And if you can tell more about the story, I mean..If you can write the details a bit. It will be lovely, :) I can't wait for Yongguk to make an appearance. Anyway, update soon eh? Heeee :D