On Immortality:

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The first drop carved a path through my left cheeck and gathered at my chin.

Why...

Why am I not dead?

I lost track of the tears as they dripped off my chin, my nose.

There was blood.

So much blood.

At least...

At least I could feel it.

Foreword

The style of writing may be a little different from what most of you are used to, but-
Thanks for clicking on my story anyway.
I wasn't very sure on how to present the writing; only that I wanted it to resemble snapshots.
I hope to slowly transition the writing into something more descriptive as our character remembers more.

Please comment if I need to improve some things.
I'd appreciate some criticism.

Warning- There may be some difficult themes.

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purplesparkles #1
Chapter 18: Wow I really like your story, I was a bit confused at the beginning about the plot and everything but I got curious so I kept reading it. And I don't regret it at all, it's different from what I'm used to see or read here on aff and it feels good. So I really can't wait to read the rest of this story !! Good Luck on your exams.
helloMi #2
Chapter 17: Thanks for putting the note at the end of the chapter! It makes everything more clear now. I look forward to your next update :)
helloMi #3
Chapter 10: Really interesting story so far! I got confused as to who was talking in some parts but after re-reading if became more clear.
BAPworld #4
Chapter 8: Great story author-nim :D, by the way, Youngjae already dead? And if you can tell more about the story, I mean..If you can write the details a bit. It will be lovely, :) I can't wait for Yongguk to make an appearance. Anyway, update soon eh? Heeee :D
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