Seven:

On Immortality:

"I think he likes me."

Sumin slipped into the room,

sliding the door shut.

She held small yellow and white flowers.

I looked up from my patchy winter skirt.

"Who?"

"Benjamin."

She turned a delicate shade of pink.

"Ben- Benji?"

"What?"

"The soldier who keeps visiting.

Your aunt calls him Benji."

"Oh. Yes, him."

Pinker cheeks.

She placed the flowers on the table.

She moved it to a vase.

"They're from him?"

I nodded at the vase,

placing the needle down.

She nodded.

"What're you going to do about it?"

"I don't know."

"Well."

I began to repair my skirt agin.

"He's good-looking.

Prettier than you."

She smiled, and crept back out.

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purplesparkles
#1
Chapter 18: Wow I really like your story, I was a bit confused at the beginning about the plot and everything but I got curious so I kept reading it. And I don't regret it at all, it's different from what I'm used to see or read here on aff and it feels good. So I really can't wait to read the rest of this story !! Good Luck on your exams.
helloMi #2
Chapter 17: Thanks for putting the note at the end of the chapter! It makes everything more clear now. I look forward to your next update :)
helloMi #3
Chapter 10: Really interesting story so far! I got confused as to who was talking in some parts but after re-reading if became more clear.
BAPworld
#4
Chapter 8: Great story author-nim :D, by the way, Youngjae already dead? And if you can tell more about the story, I mean..If you can write the details a bit. It will be lovely, :) I can't wait for Yongguk to make an appearance. Anyway, update soon eh? Heeee :D