Eight:

On Immortality:

Voices outside my door woke me up.

Sliding doors are not quiet.

But I tried to stay quiet as a peered outside the room.

Sumin and the kids were still sleeping.

I heard snatches of words.

Busan, Incheon, retreat.

What was happening?

The soldier, Benjamin, was there, and two others.

Sumin's aunt and uncle.

Some other townspeople.

Were we losing the war?

MacArthur, arrival, attack.

I tried to slide the door shut.

Sumin's uncle must have heard me moving.

"Jieun."

The voices quieted, and eyes turned to me.

"I woke up."

I slid out of the room, and walked out barefoot.

"The American general is attacking Incheon.

The reds will be out of Busan soon."

"She shouldn't know about this."

They didn't trust refugees.

Soldiers had come in the middle of the night to not draw attention.

There were still spies and communist supporters.

I understood.

But I still felt a sting as I turned to the speaker.

Unfair.

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purplesparkles
#1
Chapter 18: Wow I really like your story, I was a bit confused at the beginning about the plot and everything but I got curious so I kept reading it. And I don't regret it at all, it's different from what I'm used to see or read here on aff and it feels good. So I really can't wait to read the rest of this story !! Good Luck on your exams.
helloMi #2
Chapter 17: Thanks for putting the note at the end of the chapter! It makes everything more clear now. I look forward to your next update :)
helloMi #3
Chapter 10: Really interesting story so far! I got confused as to who was talking in some parts but after re-reading if became more clear.
BAPworld
#4
Chapter 8: Great story author-nim :D, by the way, Youngjae already dead? And if you can tell more about the story, I mean..If you can write the details a bit. It will be lovely, :) I can't wait for Yongguk to make an appearance. Anyway, update soon eh? Heeee :D