Four:

On Immortality:

"Some people know already.

We heard them talking."

She motioned to the soldiers.

"So if some of us start running,

there'll be a stampede.

If we don't run,

most of us will die."

She looked ahead towards the bridge.

We were nearing it.

"Hold on tight to your bag.

Or drop it now. 

You don't want it holding you back."

There was a buzz of a radio.

My knuckles were white.

"Don't trip."

The gates began to creak open.

"Sumin... are you sure?"

"Just run."

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purplesparkles
#1
Chapter 18: Wow I really like your story, I was a bit confused at the beginning about the plot and everything but I got curious so I kept reading it. And I don't regret it at all, it's different from what I'm used to see or read here on aff and it feels good. So I really can't wait to read the rest of this story !! Good Luck on your exams.
helloMi #2
Chapter 17: Thanks for putting the note at the end of the chapter! It makes everything more clear now. I look forward to your next update :)
helloMi #3
Chapter 10: Really interesting story so far! I got confused as to who was talking in some parts but after re-reading if became more clear.
BAPworld
#4
Chapter 8: Great story author-nim :D, by the way, Youngjae already dead? And if you can tell more about the story, I mean..If you can write the details a bit. It will be lovely, :) I can't wait for Yongguk to make an appearance. Anyway, update soon eh? Heeee :D