I'M BACK! kinda...

Do you believe in magic?

hey guys!

I thought after months of not looking at this site, let's look if something happened. I saw I had a or some new subscribers. I want to thank you for subscribing even if I did not update this story since June 2016. It's already 2017 and I want finish this story. In the time that I did not write, I still had the same kind of ideas in my head. So a few weeks back I decided that I was going to rewrite this story completely. New storyline (but the same idea), new characters and a new layout. Some of my friends read the prologue and the first chapter and were quite enthousastic (is that a word?). The thing is, I decided that it wouldn't be a fanfiction over BTS but that the focus would be with the girls. I don't know if I should post it here if it's not a fanfiction...

I want you guys to help me. The prologue is down there. Please read it and tell me if I should post the rest of the story or not..

Prologue:

A door slammed shut. The man, sleeping in a chair next to the door, awakens from the loud sound. He looked with wide eyes around the room until he noticed the big and grumpy man standing in the middle of the room. The man shot up from his chair and kneeled for the big and grumpy man. "My King" said the man with a sort of fear tangled up in his words. "Where are they?" Asked the King impatiently. "Who do you mean sir?" "Those filthy girls, where are they?" "I-I don't know sir. Some of the soldiers arrived in town today, others are still on their way sir." The kneeled man finally looked up to see the King staring out of the window. "Let the soldiers know that they need to come as fast as possible, I want those girls by the end of the week." "Yes, sir." The kneeled man thought of asking why the King wanted those girls so badly, but he was too scared to ask him. The King walked out of the room without saying anything to the kneeling man. He walked through the long, dark hallways mumbling to himself. "When I have them I will be the most powerful man on earth. With their powers I will rule everything and everybody on this planet." And he laughed wickedly

I know that it is really short, sorry. So please comment if I should post it here!! I love you guys for being subscribed when I didn't deserve it!

~Floortje

 

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97wolves #1
Chapter 5: Loving these character intros, gracías for the updates;)
Kira_mato098 #2
"Do you believe in magic?" OMG this brought me back to Annarasumanara (a webtoon comic... really good!)
This seems interesting! ^ ^/ looking foward to it
Misstwilightfan1416 #3
Hi can't wait for your story it sounds interesting. You could call the kingdom Bangtan ;)