AFTER PRISON
BY JAEKNIGHT

❝ 30 YEARS IN PRISON. 30 YEARS LEFT BEHIND. ❞
> TITLE [5/5] THE TITLE, IS PERFECT. IT REALLY PICTURES MINSEOK'S LIFE AND WHAT HE FELT AFTER HE GOT OUT FROM THE PRISON. THE TITLE, TOO, GIVE THE READERS A LITTLE HINT OF WHAT'S HAPPENING AFTER MINSEOK GOT OUT FROM THE PRISON. WHEN I FIRST READ IT, IT SOUNDED A BIT OF CLICHE, I DIDN'T MEAN TO OFFENSE YOU THOUGH :d TRUTHFULLY, I'D NEVER SEEN ANY STORY WITH THE SAME TITLE, SO POINTS ON THAT! > DESCRIPTION/FOREWORD [9/10] THE DESCRIPTION WEREN'T GIVING INFORMATION AT ALL, WHICH IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE LIKE THAT, RIGHT? I REALLY LOVE YOUR TEASER, THEY GRABBED MY ATTENTION AND LEFT ME QUESTIONING IF YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED THE CHAPTER. BUT IF YOU HAVEN'T, WHY WOULD YOU REQUEST FOR A REVIEW? XD ANYWAY, THE SENTENCE '30 YEARS LEFT BEHIND' confused me, well, sort of. this is the attention grabber too, since it made me interested in reading it, and so are the readers! great job!
> STORY PLOT [30/30] you begin the story with a great result. it's a story about an inmate, and that was kim minseok, who made a suicide that got himself in prison. as he's wandering at the prison's backyard, he heard a noise that killed his best friend until he went to the crime scene. he's too angry and sad that he let out his anger in front of the panels, but he's free, which he doesn't expected to be. he went out and he noticed that everything's changed ever since he got in the priso