DON'T CHOOSE THE LATTER
BY kukunoona

❝ condition wherein things appear more beautiful than they are. ❞  TWO STRANGERS, JEONGHAN AND JISOO, SHARED A FERRIS WHEEL RIDE ON NEW YEARS EVE. BOTH RECENTLY BROKE UP WITH THEIR BOYFRIENDS.   > TITLE [5/5]
the title suits the story PERFECTLY! HOWEVER, WHEN I FIRST READ THE TITLE, MY MIND WAS PICTURING SOMEONE ASKS SOMEONE TO NOT CHOOSE THE LATTER, AND TURNS OUT, I'M literally WRONG! and the title is really beautiful, there's no better title, does it? :)

> DESCRIPTION/FOREWORD [10/10]
i like it the way you wrote 'when the engine stops and the cabins are empty' instead of 'when the ferris wheel ride finished". it really really attracts me to read it more! eventhough the question 'will they remain strangers?' sounds a little cliche, but the sentence 'when the engine stops . . .' added a bit of unusual. great job on that!

> STORY PLOT [30/30]
to be really honest, i'd never, ever, read any story with this kind of plot. of course, when i first read the description, i was thinking of course they will not remain strangers, and they not! which really kind of shocked me xd the story was really unpredictable to me. haha :) yay, full marks! :3

> GRAMMAR/SPELLING/VOCABULARY [17/20]
your grammar are pretty well, including your spelling and vocabulary. i think you should thank your beta reader for it (vronvron if i'm not mistaken? XD) there were some minor mistake