FIRST KISS
 by JELSEN

❝  A GIRL WHO HAS NEVER BEEN KISSED EXPERIENCED IT FOR THE FIRST TIME. ❞
 
> TITLE [4/5] I can never suggest a better title for this story. I mean, the story revolved around that first kiss thingy, right? However, the title seems a little plain and common for my liking, which resulted me docking one point.   > DESCRIPTION/FOREWORD [10/10] Your description and foreword is accurate. It's really good. I honestly can't get the italicized words in your description out of my head. It didn't gave away that much, which made it even better.

  > STORY PLOT [27/30] The plot is not the plot I read often, so it's not common. However, I've read three stories with similiar plots to this, which I think is purely coincidence, so that can be said that your plot is familiar. The plot was rare though, it was a pretty good choice. I like how you set it at the right time.   > GRAMMAR/SPELLING/VOCABULARY [19/20] I didn't saw any grammatical errors in your story, so you can say that I had no problem in understanding every sentence. What made me dock one point has something to do with the vocabulary. It would have been better if you explained some of the scenes more clearly.
  > CHARACTERS DEVELOPMENT [13/15] I like Yoona's character for some strange reason. There was something uncommon about her that I liked. Ga-In's character, in my admission, her character didn't really shined to me. A cha