Too Nice

Description

Jun made mistakes in the past and was determined not to make them again.

Key word: Was.

Past events replay in the present, confusion settles, and a certain person comes to top it all off.

Yet through it all, Minghao is still too nice.

Foreword

SEVENTEEEEEEEEEEEEEN YO! I have come with a Seventeen fic! I've been thinking about something like this for a while and I'm ready to post! First chapter will be out sometime soon, hopefully before 7 days pass, and I hope you all like it!

May I just say, that I think that description is the best one I've had so far? I think that it is a REALLY good description right there. 

Enjoy the Junhao!

(Check Twitter to see who the guest character is!)

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SugaFreeBoyscouts
#1
Chapter 8: I love how you made me so happy throughout this whole chapter, and then at the end you have to throw problematic MingMing in there, making me wonder where this last chapter is gonna end up. Well, I'm happy to see that it ended with JunHao happy otherwise I would have to hunt you down :)
SugaFreeBoyscouts
#2
Chapter 7: Minghao is a little criminal hm hm. "You, me and the hobos" -- probably the greatest thing I've read.

But yeah, MingMing, Jun is right. Even if you thought you were moving fast, you should have said something instead of letting everything build up to the wedding and then leaving him. That was just uncalled for, and I don't know anyone who would take someone back after they did that.

Things better go well, like, really well for JunHao, or I will scream.
SugaFreeBoyscouts
#3
Chapter 6: Wow, obviously Jun didn't know about SoonHoon, so when Soonyoung just casually mentions having a boyfriend and it so obviously being Jihoon, how come Jun didn't react?

I'm so glad that JunHao is working out right now. I really need them to be okay; they need each other. Especially since MingMing randomly came back all of a sudden. I mean, what an idiot...

He came back and it seems like he's acting as if he didn't just leave Jun at the altar, taking all his belongings and some of Jun's money with him. Saying he missed him, acting all happy like he was just going for a short vacation or something. What is wrong with him? Go away MingMing.
SugaFreeBoyscouts
#4
Chapter 5: SOONHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON -- Honestly, before SoonSeok ever appeared in my heart, there was SoonHoon. I like SoonHoon on the side in stories about another otp *cough* Meanie *cough*, but as a main, I like it to be JiCheol idk.

But they're already together and Jun doesn't know about their relationship? Hm, that's interesting, very interesting.

AND POOR MINGHAO, baby was such a troublemaker :'( I couldn't imagine him being someone like that because he's so cute AND HE THINKS JUN IS CUTE, TOO UGH. MINGMING YOU BETTER STAY AWAY
SugaFreeBoyscouts
#5
Chapter 4: Who hurt you, Minghao; did someone hurt you to make you like this? He has such sweet reasoning for not wanting people to do anything for him. Oh, he's so precious.

And Jun...JUUUUUUUUUUUUN ugh. You fell so quickly for someone who's the opposite of you. And why is it so obvious that it's Jun who sent him the flowers, but Minghao doesn't see it? I don't remember reading a part where Minghao was told that his meal was paid for. Maybe that's how Minghao didn't know.
SugaFreeBoyscouts
#6
Chapter 3: Aw poor Jun-ie :(

Hm...Soonyoung's cheeks went pink when he mentioned the person who worked there that he knows. He must like them...so is it Woozi or Seokmin? (Or someone else? Idk those are the main ships) I was feeling it with JiCheol earlier though, so I'll assume it's Seokmin.

Yeah, Minghao is not going to like that at all. I can just imagine what he's gonna do ha. I can't wait to see his reaction (If you're going to show it to me).

I hope MingMing doesn't ruin anything like come waltzing in on Jun as soon as he shacks up Minghao or I'll be maaaaaad.
SugaFreeBoyscouts
#7
Chapter 2: UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGH

JunHao is being cute...I love it

Like, I love them, and this wasn't even a real date. It was just to pay Jun back for him paying ahead for Minghao or whatever.

I'm so impatient when it comes to romance though. I was waiting for the lovely kiss that wasn't meant to happen (obviously, that'd be weird). I'm sure MingMing is gonna have some kind of appearance again, so I'm gonna wait for that, and then the two Ming's can fight for Jun-ie ^^
SugaFreeBoyscouts
#8
Chapter 1: I love how in fanfiction, it's just assumed that everyone's gay. I find it so funny, like, if this happened in real life, chances are Minghao would be straight and would be like "wtf no". Also, what if he was in a relationship? Ever think of that, Hoshi? Hm? HMMMMMMM? (I know it's for the sake of the story, but I'm just speaking my thoughts teehee)

Also, I figured MingMing would be in there. That's sad that for someone who was so grateful for Jun paying for him, he turned into what he did. But like, with the gold-digging (pretty much), I was kind of expecting him to say no to the proposal. But I guess he didn't really like Jun for himself anymore when it got to that actual time since he left. So sad :'( poor Jun-ie