You Just Don't Know

FriDATE The Thirteenth

 

FriDate the 13th

October 23, 2011

FrenchSha

 

 

Patricia, our roommate, walked in like an angel – in disguise. Tall and slender. Dark hair. Tanned-skin. Not too picky, a go with the flow kind of girl – perfect for the role of a proxy.

 

“Hey guys.” She dropped her bag on her bed and sat beside Olly who just stared at her the whole time.

 

I joined them. I told her about the date leaving the fact that Bianca was supposed to be in her shoes and now she’s filling hers. She got very excited about Olly’s description of the mystery man. Very smart and kind. She got too excited to ask about his looks. Well, she dated a punk guitarist who smelled like a walking cigarette half a year ago. And just last month she went out with an asthmatic John Doe who laughed like an old guy panting for air. So maybe a few hours spent with a Newton dressed like the sewing machine blew up is just another bad date, and hoping, eventually it’ll be forgotten.

 

“All right. I’m in.” Trisha, as what we fondly call her, declared with an extreme enthusiasm.

 

A keen smile instinctively popped on our faces then as Olly and I looked at each other, silently linking the same thought. Ooooh. She had no clue of what mayhem she signed herself up into. 

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frenchsha
#1
@jetsora, thank you talaga ha. Actually I wanted to pick out celebrities to embody the characters kaya lng mas feel ko na original para mas mafeel ko. Hahaha.
jetsora
#2
there's this thing that i wanted to say<br />
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AYOS TO!!! :))))
frenchsha
#3
Thanks to my persevered friends who really wanted to do the "Disastrous Date" theme. I was eyeing on the vacation something or "A place I wanted to visit" 'cause I'd like to write an article about France then I ended up writing the story. Got a little help too. :) Hahaha. Well I really prefer original characters for this one 'cause I can't think of someone that fits my characters. There are Kimerald stories here? I'm not a fan but not a hater too. But I'm okay with Gerald and Sarah. 'Cause their genre is always romantic comedy. :)
dubumints
#4
I like this! It's so original and my first time to see a pinoy story here on aff! (screw kimerald stuffs here in aff. Lol. No offense on their writers though. -.-) and this seems soooo cute! :D i'd love it if we had a writing project like this in class!