A Little Too Cute... Not Good

FriDATE The Thirteenth

 

 

FriDate the 13th

November 10, 2011

FrenchSha

 

We finally reached our dormitory. We were surprised to see the gate wide open.

 

“Olly, did you close the gates before we left?” I asked.

 

“Huh?” I sensed the guilt on her voice. “I. Think. So…” She stuttered.

 

We wanted to wash the poop off the sole of our shoe so we headed towards the faucet attached to the wall facing the tall hedge that separates our building and the All-Boys dormitory. I was walking behind Olly when she caught a glimpse of a man’s figure leaning against our dorm’s wall. She pushed me by the shoulder and shoved me aside – covering my mouth to refrain from screaming.

 

“Doris, I think a thief just entered our territory.” She whispered with a breaking voice. She asked me if we should call the cops. HELLO! We weren’t even sure. I told her that we should take a closer look first before making a conclusion. So we angled ourselves to take a peek and fixed our eyes on the scene where Bianca was trapped between the long, sturdy arms of her ex-boyfriend.

 

“Bianc, it wasn’t who you thought it was.” She shook her head in disbelief.

 

“That’s what you said when I saw you strolling around the park with a girl clinging unto you.” She tried to push him away as she forced the words out . It wasn’t easy to talk while you try to escape the big weight leaning against you.

 

She started to curse at him and to shut her up; he placed his lips against hers. And the rest of her words were silenced. Ahhh. That was so sweet. But Olly thought otherwise.

 

“HOLY SMOKE! BIANCAAAAAA!”

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frenchsha #1
@jetsora, thank you talaga ha. Actually I wanted to pick out celebrities to embody the characters kaya lng mas feel ko na original para mas mafeel ko. Hahaha.
jetsora #2
there's this thing that i wanted to say<br />
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AYOS TO!!! :))))
frenchsha #3
Thanks to my persevered friends who really wanted to do the "Disastrous Date" theme. I was eyeing on the vacation something or "A place I wanted to visit" 'cause I'd like to write an article about France then I ended up writing the story. Got a little help too. :) Hahaha. Well I really prefer original characters for this one 'cause I can't think of someone that fits my characters. There are Kimerald stories here? I'm not a fan but not a hater too. But I'm okay with Gerald and Sarah. 'Cause their genre is always romantic comedy. :)
dubumints #4
I like this! It's so original and my first time to see a pinoy story here on aff! (screw kimerald stuffs here in aff. Lol. No offense on their writers though. -.-) and this seems soooo cute! :D i'd love it if we had a writing project like this in class!
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