Kameko to Takeru [on Hiatus for unknown time]

Description

Kameko is being bullied and left alone. Not even her sister Leiko helps her. She lives a reclusive life until her sister brings home a man. And this man changes her life.. maybe forever.

 

 

Sorry, if that Description is a little short.. my former one was kinda stupid, too.. well I'm not that good with descriptions, so please bear with me..

Foreword

That's an extract of my story:

 

“What the hell are you doing here at two o’clock in the morning?” I whispered angrily.
“Of course I liked to see you. My wish is fulfilled. I`m satisfied now. Thanks. And I stayed here all the time because Leiko offered me to sleep over. I don`t have a home you have to know.” He said. I wanted to say something else but he stepped towards me and kissed me. I immediately wanted to step back but he didn`t let me. He put his hands at my back so I couldn`t escape. I hit him but he didn`t let go till he was.. well.. satisfied.

 

Hope, you'll like it. English is not my native language, please understand.

Mizuki_23
I finally updated, yay! It really makes wonders happen if someone comments.. ^___^

Comments

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amnakanna
#1
Chapter 6: chapter 6 is very nice
petalineage
#2
Chapter 6: Nice one.. This is the first time I've read a Japanese fanfic..And it features one of my j-pop biases, Takeru..I'm really glad I found your fic. :) And the story's interesting..

Hm...I've read some errors in the way you construct the sentences but I believe there's always a room for improvement so good luck and keep up the good work.. :)
melove246
#3
Chapter 11: more more plz
ChibiMusicStar
#4
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Sorry for taking your space. It's rare to find japanese fanfic
ann1914
#5
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MADNNEESS #6
Chapter 9: LOL "takeruly" that's good, I like that! xDD
Dahye_ssi #7
Update!!!!!
Lov3nit3 #8
XD I have been reading your SuG fanfic and i just want to say that it is amazing so far!!!
Hilyen_Yellow #9
I loved the first chapter so far!! The plot seems interesting, update some time!!