HAPPY NEW YEAR

Love Advice

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 Happy New Year.....
 
I want to said it, since I didn't Merry you for Christmast. >.<
Hope this year will be more awesome than before.
Sorry if I made some mistake and made you hurt or mad......
 
 
 
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I find some mistake I made at my Chapter 5, 4men talk, so this's some correction.
 
paragraph 26
       “Jin…JAEJIN!!” Key shouted. “I called you few times already, what are you looking at?” He said as he turned to see my direction. “Isn’t they your band mate?” He asked as he dragged the chair on my right and sit there. “Wait, do you..? Aaa…I gotcha.” He said with a knowing smile.
       I said, act dumb fully. I'm too embarrassed to admit it to him. I’m just told him about my feeling and he found it right after that.
 
It should be
       "Huh? What hyung?" I said, act dumb fully. I'm too embarrassed to admit it to him. I’m just told him about my feeling and he found it right after that.
 
 
Minhwan part, paragraph 20
“Yeah, Seunghyun too.” Hongki continued Jonghun story. This on really got my intention. I stop eating and look to Seunghyun. “You know it hyung?” Yeah, Seunghyun has one-side love.
 
It hould be
“Yeah, Seunghyun too.” Hongki continued Jonghun story. This on really got my intention. I stop eating and look to Hongki-hyung. “You know it hyung?” Yeah, Seunghyun has one-side love.
 
 
 
Sorry for the mistake...
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Dinopuppylove #1
Chapter 10: U probably heard this so many times but I can hardly find ANY SeungHyun x JaeJin stories ~ it's so mean cause I love that ship !! Anyways I love your story ~~ please make more SeungHyun x JaeJin because your a really good author<33
diamante25 #2
Chapter 10: We need more Seunghyun and Jaejin stories!!!! I can't believe there aren't that many. But this was so cute and me being the over-emotional person that I am cried towards the end of chapter 9! I love this I hope you make more F.T Island stories (with Seunghyun in them) like this in the future
akared #3
love this story!!!!!!!!!!!
arisuin #4
Waaa... Chapter 3 started out funny and cute but you introduced a conflict at the end. Ahhh! The tension..! Seunghyun has a rival. So... Does that mean that the person that Seunghyun likes is Dongho...?
Awww... I was kinda hoping that it would be Jaejin...
>.<
arisuin #5
Jonghoon, Hongki - nice timing! Now Jaejin would have to suffer the suspense of not knowing who Seunghyun likes. Wait... That means I have to suffer the same suspense... Haiz...
>.<
arisuin #6
Uhhuuu.... Looks like Jaejin is awestruck by Seunghyun's appearance to the point that he develops a certain attraction towards Seunghyun!
arisuin #7
Hahaha! I'm done with writing my FT Island fic. Going to just chill and read yours! Be prepared to have comments bombarded here!
asdfghjBullySong #8
ow gosh ! WTH !! jaejin ! what are you doing ? you didn't realised it ? it is all for you, you are the one that seunghyun loves .. aigoo ..:))<br />
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update soon please :D
aiyarare #9
AHHAHAHA... i can imagine the sound attack. XD XD<br />
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it's ok u can't update fastly. i know it's need more much time to write our own story than read other author story. my college task is seldom, but when it's come, they'll make me difficult to do anything else. Look, I'm even worsen than you. <br />
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I'm happy you update this when i'm free ^_^
aiyarare #10
love ur update ^_^<br />
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Yay! they will help
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