Torn

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Suho had no idea that Yixing had a huge liking for him in the past year. The secret letters he sent to Suho’s locker went unnoticed for Suho already had someone special at that time; his close friend named Jongin, someone Yixing was clueless about.

The following year, as Yixing gave up on Suho, his hopes were set high again when he finally met Jongin. The meeting, somehow, was witnessed by Suho and it created a big tension among the two, especially when Yixing’s identity slowly opened up.  Will Luhanrevelation of his love interest will affect the love triangle? Who would win Jongin’s heart in the end?

Will the situation get more complicated? What if the love battle is even bigger than they expected?

Foreword

There's one love to be fought for by two, 

but how will they make their moves,

If situations grow through,

And complications arise from the truth?

 

Complicated indeed.

Hiding the feelings,

Keeping the love inside,

Setting the jealousy aside,

 

But...

It's not that easy.

 

What triggers the eagerness?

For their love to be confessed?

 

What if it's more than a simple love story?

What if revelations are more heart-stopping?

 

They never know.

 

 

Anything can happen.

 

"Torn"

 

 

 

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Hello guys! This is my first fanfic. Hope you like it! This is a sukailay (Suho/Kai/Lay) fanfic, but I might consider another option depending on my poll, or maybe depending on major plot twists I'm trying to make. By the way, Kai's image here is innocent, because it should really be, and he has a humble, gentle personality offstage, so I'm applying it here.... And also I made this fanfic because some pairings in EXO like Kailay, Kaiho (Maybe sekai, but it's fairly popular though Kaisoo is the most popular Kai ship) are really rare, besides, I think Kailay and Kaiho are good together. Also, Kai's #1 in my bias list, Sehun's #2, Suho's #5 and Lay is #7. I have been a little bit too talkative aren't I? XD My apologies, just wanna share, but if you want to know my bias ranking, just comment! Please enjoy!

2nd edit: I was able to at least make a poster for the fanfic, sorry if it's a little bit shabby. ^_^ Credits to the owners of the photos! I was only able to edit photos in our IPad, so I cannot make poster designs and photos really detailed.

Another note: I'll be fairly active from this month to June 7/8. Since it's vacation here, and I might update every 1,2 or 3 days, depending on my building of ideas for the story, but in some occasions, I might update more than one chapter if I can think fast, lol You guys are free to comment for reactions, suggestions, etc.! I'd be happy if you'd share your thoughts! :) I'm still active when school starts, and I might update every Friday and Saturday/Sunday (if not busy, maybe Monday and Wednesday too) from June 9 onwards, so don't worry! :3

Edit: Credits to all of the owners of the photos I used for making posters. :)

Credits also to Overdose Reviews - especially hyunvirus for the reviewing (Advanced thank you and thank you! ^__^)

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Credits to Crimson Twilight Review Shop! (Advanced thank you and thank you too! ^__^)

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Credits to Mental Breakdown Reviews (Advanced thank you and thank you! I already saw the master list! ^__^)

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Credits to The Crossing Timezones Live Review Shop and the "The Mochi Bird of Life" (Thank you! ^__^)

 

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jasdg22
Message: I will start another fanfic.. I'm sorry.. It's a Woosoo Fanfic (Infinite) I have a poll about it on my update XD

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Beti27 #1
Chapter 15: I just read ur story and was intrigued since it is rare to find a fanfinction with so many kai ships but now i see that u r not going to continue :(:( good luck on ur other stories this one had so much potential :):)
mentirinha
#2
I must say the plot really got me anxious to read this, but I'm quite conflictet here, because I want a kaixing ending hahaha.
Throwaway-143 #3
Chapter 14: I don't know if you're continuing this but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this! It was really well written with only a few grammar problems. I hope to see more writing from you!
supernaturel
#4
Im looking for kailay but that is what pentagon? Omona! :O I cant stand my baby lay feel pain but looking to comments , he is. Well I will read it very very soon but please make yixing happy okey! :3
YuutoSaruki #5
Chapter 14: Please update soon! This is a great story, really ^^ I like the way you write (and the way Jongin is loved be many boys, bcs I'm Kai biased :DD) looking forward to reading next chapter! ^^
myotterprince #6
This is kinda like me and my friends except dancing and key O o O
jasdg22 #7
Important Note: I have to notify you guys that my school starts tomorrow, and I might update less frequently since I'll be busy with my studies, but still, I can update! We have a holiday on Thursday, so I might be able to update Wednesday night. Also, because of school, I'll try to update 2-3 chapters over the weekends where I don't have classes (Friday, Saturday, and possibly Sunday) Thank you guys for the continuous support, praise, and everything! I'll continue doing my best in writing! :) ^___^
I can also be able to update when a holiday is announced, like I mentioned earlier. :) Thank you! And I'm sorry too. :)
DoingCrackWithExo
#8
Chapter 12: I like the way you write this...it feels like everybody has lovey-dovey feelings for kai except chen-chen and chanyeol.
kpoplover365 #9
Chapter 9: KAIHO KAIHO KAIHO
DoingCrackWithExo
#10
Chapter 10: I love the story...but i don't trust luhan...