Me and Nakta

Ready or not ?

I think is about 6 month that me and Nakta was been friend and is been the best month of my life.

i feel so happy where i with him even chanyeol can see that he make me happy that make chanyeol for he think that i been so sad since i beak upp with ex boyfriend.

when i now sitting with him on this cinema. i am not look on movie for i look only on him and after the movie is ending. when him ask what i think about the movie. i not know what to say.

- what you look movie Gohn-hyung ? said Nakta

- eh yes i was.

- No you was not.

- for you can tell what you think about movie.

- okey the i was not.

- what you look that the ?

me said i head that i was look on you but i can not said to you. so i said that i was look on some guy that i like . then Nakta got angry on me.

hi said that is not okey for they was not here for me look that guys how i like and hit my head. he walk from me. i just run after he and i said that i was sorry.

Nakta just look and he said that i have buys food for me even he forgiveness me. i said okey. i was just happy that he was go to forgiveness me. So we begin to walk to a restaurant so i buys nakta some food so he forgiveness me.

 

hej hej = hey hey

this second chapter and this about nakta and gohn when they was on movie.

and this that.

hej då = bye bye

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spygenl #1
Chapter 8: sorry if im rude or something but, some advice from reader :
direct dialogue should be inside "" symbol (example : "I think so," I said.) to avoid confusion between dialogue and non dialogue.
joanna20 #2
Chapter 7: It's a blurry & confusing. The wording & sentences. I love yr story but that's only flaw of it. I apologise if I offended u! Sorry!
virgogal
#3
Do you need a beta? I'm liking this story but like what saraleezz said, it's rather uncomfortable. Hope you're not offended by my words.
saraleezz #4
Chapter 3: you got a nice plot. but it's just a little discomfort in grammatical, isn't English ur first language ? it's ok you brave enough to write, I'm still being a reader tho hehe, fighting !
1darknami #5
^^ That is just awsome ^^
1darknami #6
You got wish that is go to bi update soon ^^
Lee_Haneul #7
:))) Don't Give up on the storyyy :))) Fight on :))
Update soon :)
AWOOOO_O
#8
Chapter 2: Ahaha I love fallenenigma's stories too bottom!kris ♡♡♡
1darknami #9
You weclome ^^ i am honured to that you like my story mabye is not as good as yours story ^^
I know how go to be kris ex-boyfriend ^^ npw ^^
I hope you like the first chapter that i do now ^^^
Fallenenigma #10
Omg!! I'm so surprised when I found my name in the tags!!
Feel super100x honoured this time! *yehett~*

I'm looking forward the next chapter, dear!! ^^
I thought Kris's ex would be Tao but turned it out it's his bestie
I wonder who's krissy's ex-boyfriend ~? ^^

Update soon!! ^^