Party-2

Ready or not ?

So where me and chanyeol stand alone.

i did know what to do or what to say to guy that tao talk about for so many months.

it was really awkward with us.

so begin chanyeol start speak.

- so you are friend with tao right ? ask chanyeol

- yes his is my friend best and my romemate. i said

- I know that for his speak lot about you when we are togheter.

I start blush when he said that for i did not know that tao talk about to chanyoel as he has did to me.

Chanyeol saw that i hade start to blush.

- He has not said anthing bad about you.

- only good thing about you and I think that what i heard about you make i feel lite for you.

- what ? i said.

- you heard right i start have lite crush on you. Said chanyeol.

I did know not what to say.

chanyeol just look on me with a smile.

- will you dance with Kris ? chanyeol ask with a smile to me.

I just begin to smile and said yes.

So where we begin to dance and all time we where dance i just look that chanyeol. I feel that i was fell little love in with chanyeol even i did not know chanyeol that much.

A person was look on us and was happy to that tao. Tao was just happy that i was happy agian.

- how are you look that tao ? ask baekhyun.

- that chanyeol and kris how is dance. said tao.

- okey.

- they look happy don't they ?

- Yes they do.

Tao just smile and just kiss baekhyun.

chanyeol saw that tao kiss baekhyun. He thought that maybe he just kiss kris kind. that what he did.

chanyeol just kiss on my kind. I got really red face. I just look that chanyeol after he did that.

- do you want to go on date with me ? chanyeol ask

- er ! yes. i said.

- okey when we do dance so can we settle time and day when we go to have our first date.

- okey. i said.

 

and how we begin to dathing  but just that know i did not know that i will meet my ex agan for i start dathing chanyeol.

maybe that is for best that i did not know that.

 

hey

I back again.

This my first chapter in how long i not know. i am happy to be back again and i go try write. This is first chapter for this night for i go write to today. I most go  now to write next chapter

bye bye = hej då

 

 

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spygenl #1
Chapter 8: sorry if im rude or something but, some advice from reader :
direct dialogue should be inside "" symbol (example : "I think so," I said.) to avoid confusion between dialogue and non dialogue.
joanna20 #2
Chapter 7: It's a blurry & confusing. The wording & sentences. I love yr story but that's only flaw of it. I apologise if I offended u! Sorry!
virgogal
#3
Do you need a beta? I'm liking this story but like what saraleezz said, it's rather uncomfortable. Hope you're not offended by my words.
saraleezz #4
Chapter 3: you got a nice plot. but it's just a little discomfort in grammatical, isn't English ur first language ? it's ok you brave enough to write, I'm still being a reader tho hehe, fighting !
1darknami #5
^^ That is just awsome ^^
1darknami #6
You got wish that is go to bi update soon ^^
Lee_Haneul #7
:))) Don't Give up on the storyyy :))) Fight on :))
Update soon :)
AWOOOO_O
#8
Chapter 2: Ahaha I love fallenenigma's stories too bottom!kris ♡♡♡
1darknami #9
You weclome ^^ i am honured to that you like my story mabye is not as good as yours story ^^
I know how go to be kris ex-boyfriend ^^ npw ^^
I hope you like the first chapter that i do now ^^^
Fallenenigma #10
Omg!! I'm so surprised when I found my name in the tags!!
Feel super100x honoured this time! *yehett~*

I'm looking forward the next chapter, dear!! ^^
I thought Kris's ex would be Tao but turned it out it's his bestie
I wonder who's krissy's ex-boyfriend ~? ^^

Update soon!! ^^