I Hear Your Voice

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Description

When an intended confession turns into a rigorous catastrophe, Lu Han wakes up three months later with no memory about the failed attempt engraved in his mind. He sets out to seek the truth where he discovers that he has fortuitously possessed supernatural abilities – retrospective and telepathy in which he can look back on someone’s past as well as hear their inner, impenetrable thoughts.

 

Upon his pursuit of veracity, he stumbles upon various deprived people who are hiding behind their malicious facades and most importantly, will he be able to acquire the loss of his memory that can lead him evoke the futile confession to his all-time crush, Im Yoona?

 

Foreword

Prologue

Yoona fidgets restlessly at her seat as she is currently anticipating the appearance of a guy who has yet to show up. A low, audible sigh is heard as she peeks a glance at her wristwatch for the umpteenth time. It has been almost an hour yet he hasn’t arrived yet. Could it be he have forgotten today’s crucial meeting?

Nevertheless, she manages to let a smile run across her face by merely reminiscing the moment when Lu Han had asked her for a meeting at the playground near their school only to confess his feelings for her. Seriously, she is not expecting he would develop affectionate feelings for her though he has dropped a bunch of obvious hints for several times. Prior to the hints, she pretends to be oblivious. She wants to hear directly from his mouth so that she can acknowledge it.

Both of them have been close friends since the first year of high school. They practically do everything together that everyone in the school dubs them as twins. To be honest, she has loved him since the first moment she lays her eyes on him. She is intrigued by his enticing charm. She couldn’t contain how much she feels when Lu Han chooses to sit next to her and since then, they have been a pair of inseparable friends.

Lu Han is undoubtedly nice to her. He never makes her upset even for a slight. The other girls are awfully envious towards her when Lu Han opts to be only close to her and never sticks with the other female students. No words can express her euphoria when Lu Han has once said these words to her;

“I already have you. Why should I bother sticking with the other girls?”

Yesterday, right before the morning class was about to start, Lu Han came to her locker and uttered, “Tomorrow, I’ll confess my feelings for you… so please don’t run away when you see me tomorrow, Yoona!”

Despite being in complete shock, she tried to be composed and merely nodded in comprehension. “Alright then, Han. I’m looking forward to hearing your confession!” She twisted a big smile at the corner of her lips. She was beyond exhilarated to hear this shocking new in such early morning, for God’s sake.

“Then I’ll see you at the playground near our school,” he answered coolly.

“What if when you were not there tomorrow?” There was some sort of provocation in her remark, making the latter flinch slightly.

Lu Han laughed nervously and stared into her eyes fervently. “Don’t worry, dear. I swear I’ll definitely be there.”

Well, that’s what he said but look now, he is not even here! How depressing she must have been now.

After much thought, she opts to simply leave the scene. What’s the use if she insists to be here but the one who wants to meet her is not even here? Plus, the clock has struck to 3.30 pm. If Lu Han really yearned for her presence, he wouldn’t have made her wait for him to thix extent. This is really, really too much for her to handle alone.

When she is about to walk out the playground, her cell phone rings and she bothers to accept the call.

“Hello?” she starts monotonously as she flicks the ‘accept’ button.

“Hello, Yoona?! Where are you right now?!”

Flustered, she flinches at the frantic voice. She recognizes the husky, deep voice. It’s clearly Minseok’s voice. “Minseok? What’s wrong? I’m at the playground near the school.”

“Please come straight to the hospital! Lu Han.... he’s.... got into an accident!”

“What the fu-” she nearly curses, but thank God she does not. “Lu Han’s got into an accident? What happened?”

“It’s too long to explain here! Just come straight to the hospital! I’ll text you the address.”

“Alright then! I’ll head there as soon as you send me the address!”

The call has ended and she impatiently waits for the text message. Shock, woe and bemusement mash together into one, rushing vigorously through her adrenaline rush.

It’s as if a dream comes to reality when she heard the breaking news. She couldn’t contain her complete shock when she knows Lu Han is at the hospital right now due to the accident he has gotten himself into. She eventually knows why he’s not here.

If this meeting were not held in the first place, this kind of extreme situation wouldn’t have happened. There’s no use to blame anyone here nor would she cry herself silly. Lu Han has already in the hospital. He may be in the emergency room as for now.

Poor Lu Han, what if he were to pass away through this accident, following his parent’s steps to death?

No ing way. Lu Han will be alright and he is not going to die, for God’s sake!

Well, that’s what she hopes to be. But what if death would be the best option if the result of his consciousness will only bring misery to her?

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Title : I Hear Your Voice

Genres : Romance, Supernatural, Psychological and Violence

Characters : EXO's Lu Han feat. SNSD's Yoona, EXO's Xiumin and Jung Sisters

Minor Characters : EXO’s D.O, Kai, Baekhyun, Chen and others.

Author's Note : Hello there! I’m here to bring you a brand new, short story entitled ‘I Hear Your Voice’. I pretty know the title is definitely plagiarized but the title itself relates to the plot so yeah, no comment hehe. Anyway, this story is my entry for Darkfic Writing Contest. To be honest, I was moved to write this kind of genre which is not my cup of tea (though I do love to read dark fics) because of I was inspired by watching a decent k-drama, ‘Who Are You?’. Anyways, please give your undying support to me and wish me good luck for the contest. Not to forget, for any queries, do drop it at my ask.fm (:

p/s : Wonderful poster is beautifully done unlighted @` NYCTOPHILIA。 Go visit her shop!

p/s 2 : Amazing trailer is wonderfully done by sebaeklu @ Blackpearl Trailer Shop. She's amazing so go check her shop out!

p/s 3 : List of reviews I've requested from the particular shops ;

I’m just… wow. I really took note of every detail.

Krystal has to be my favorite character here. She’s really so mysterious. And everything she says is just… wow. And the sixth voice is my favorite chapter. You know why. That was really well planned.

- arcadiyan @ ❋ 아르카디얀스 // arcadiyans // review shop

 

Okay, I'm waiting for the rest of it, because I'm curious about the ending. Whether there will be a love scene between Luhan and Yoona?

- Xia_Se_Lu @ ヵ゛ラク シ Ⓖ ⓐ Ⓛ ⓐ ⓧ ⓨ Review Shop

 

Nothing wrong in particular, It wasn’t rushed.  I like how you elaborated the story. Chapter after chapter, Luhan develops a sense of tragedy, well written!

- UniDeerPanda @ Heart Attack Graphic Shop ft.Chanyeol

 

Your story was alright, but not really my favourite types of genres. But I think you've done well. You have a lot of upvotes and commenters whic is great.

- Mirokochan @ ● ✯SPELLBOUND✯ Reviewing & Advertising Request Shop ●

 

The was you easily made the readers understand what was going on with their lives was really breath taking and
I really loved how you made everything connected and how the characters fix the
puzzle was really astonishing.

- Chunkee__ @ ♪♫ Midnight Sonata Café ♫♪ | Reviews and Recs

 

I absolutely loved it, and I am going to stay subscribed. It is actually the first boyxgirl fanfic I have liked and subscribed to, which is a great achievement for you in my eyes, since most of the girls in fanfics I have read are usually annoying and whiny.

- MakeMyLifeColourful @ ❄ seoulitudes reviews

 

I think your story is very impressive when it comes to plot. I can see that you’re quite a K-drama fan, because I’ve noticed elements from several of my favorite dramas in this story. I am a er for dark theme, and your abuse/murder/whatever else subplot with Kyungsoo was a lot of fun for me to read.

- Fan_of_Karma @ ~Karma's Review Shop~ 

 

With every read chapter, I felt like I was watching a drama, and this story have become my favorite one. :D

- deedee_zelo90 @ f r o z e n • in • t i m e | a re v i e w shop

 

I liked the idea of Luhan having powers that were not his from MAMA. I've seen a lot of stories (Including one of my own) where the members of EXO end up having or already have their given powers. I like that you took an original twist and gave him a different sort of power. Your plot is well developed and I like it. The flow is not too fast nor too slow.

- LoveX2254 @ ♦Troublemaker Review Shop♦

 

I did enjoy the ending.  I was relieved that everything within the story arc was resolved and the characters went on with their happy lives

- YifanForever @ Attack On Titan Review Shop

 

Uniqueness and creativity is a really huge thing for me because I love originality. You took such a simple power and made it seem all brand new to me through Luhan’s mind as if I never heard of the ability a day before in my life.

- KitsuneMitsune @ DW ∞ Review Shop

 

I enjoy reading as the uniqueness and creativity of your story keeps me reading! Well done with the plotting... Not much to add on, just really good job. 

- JiaYee_c @ ♛ Better Stories || REVIEW SHOP

 

As for the foreword, it's a short prologue that explains what happened before Luhan's accident, which is good in my opinion since from the very first chapter we get to move on to the proper plot. Also, the prologue shortly explains what kind of relationship Luhan and Yoona had before Luhan's accident happened, which is a good thing, too.

- LadySarcasmSazzy's Review Shop

 

Extremely coherent. The plot really picked up after chapter nine but you did a great job keeping everything together. I don’t read many mysteries but the way everything played out was very impressive. You must have put quite a bit of thought into your planning.

- Sforzando @ (Ameliorate) Review Shop


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yoonasmile
#1
Loving this :)
RealisticOptimist
#2
This sounds amazing wowww
originme0324
#3
Can't believe I almost missed this story 0.0 It's amazeballs XD Being deprived of LuYoon is not good xD
Luyoon4ever_ #4
Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Ahhhhh~ Luyoon <33
When the kiss happened i while smiling like a idiot~!
khrnsf
#5
Chapter 17: this is a really good storyyyyyyy i swear!
thank you for making such an amazing story author niim!❤️
EXO4ever123 #6
Chapter 12: ottoke, kyungsoooooo!!! :'(
EXO4ever123 #7
Chapter 10: poor baby kyungsoo getting beat up by his dad! :'( i can't handle this...i even imagined it in my mind, it's just like his character from 'its okay its love', he's also getting beaten up by his dad :'(
EXO4ever123 #8
Chapter 9: omg, it feels like the story is centered on Kyungsoo and kai and luhan! but pooooor squishy kyungie :'( i feel like i just want to bear hug him!
EXO4ever123 #9
Chapter 7: i thought there wouldn't be a lot of LuYoon moments in this story, but the kiss was hawt! I tell you...and way to ruin the moment Kai! but...I seriously love the story, even a few of luyoon are showed but this story is really interesting! and go luhan, save Kaisoo!!!