The Ultimate Love

The Night Before Valentine

(Lovex 'O Chocolate Shop)

Amber: (Typing something in the keyboard) Oh, now that is interesting.. (Press a button)

Gikwang: (Screams)

Amber: I love pretty boys screaming.. How y.. (Press another button) And I hate it! (Walks toward Gikwang)

Gikwang: Minzy..

Amber: Why are you still conscience?

Gikwang: Minzy..

Amber: Who's Minzy?

Gikwang: Home.. I will..

Amber: (Slap Gikwang) Such pretty face! How pity!

(A bell sounded)

Amber: Oh come on! Why you always forgot the keys! (Walks out of the room)

Gikwang: (Opens his eyes and looks at his left) Sung Ho! Are you still there? Hang on.. We'll get outta here..

(Silence)

Gikwang: Sung Ho?

Sung Ho: I, I.. (Look at Gikwang) I feel nothing.. You should resist..

Gikwang: What do you mean?

Sung Ho: You're scared.. How weak..

Gikwang: No.. Sung Ho! Stop it! You're not youself anymore! Wake up!

Sung Ho: I am.. This is me.. Sung Ho.. Serving for my Master..

(The camera focusses on Gikwang worried face)


Amber: (Opens the door) Where have you been? Great! Another one?

John Park: Where's Dong Hee?

Amber: No idea.. Toilet?

John Park: What the hell is wrong with him? Ah! Help me with this guy.. Heavy!

Amber: Where the plastic did you get him?

John Park: The Emotion Tracker sensed him.. This might boost our progress a little bit..

Amber: Oh.. That's good.. Finally he's no longer on service..

John Park: Who?

Amber: 2014.. Still resisting..

John Park: Get Dong Hee for me! I'll take care of him myself.. (Opens a door and step inside and closes it..)

Amber: Good luck..


(Inside a room)

Dong Hee: (Feel exausted) Hah, hah.. Where am I? (Look around)

Exon: (Intercom) What-are-you-waiting-for?-Revive-us!-Revive-us!

Dong Hee: Ah! My head.. My plastic head!

Exon: Revive-us!-Revive-us!-Revive-us!

Dong Hee: Ah! Please.. Give me a break..

Exon: (Silent)

Dong Hee: Master?

Exon: You-disobeyed-us!-You-will-be-exocuted!-Exocute!-Exocute!

Dong Hee: (Worried face. Painfully stand up and tries to run to the time machine)


(Outside the bathroom)

Amber: Dong Hee! Would you please stop pooping and get back to work!

(No answer)

Amber: Dong Hee! What are you doing in there?

(No answer)

Amber: I'll break this door if you don't answer me!

(No answer)

Amber: (Take the keys from her pocket and tries to unlocking it)

Dong Hee: Are you that desprate?

Amber: (Turn aroung and shocked) You terrible plastic! Where have you been? And what is that? Blood?

Dong Hee: Tactical PrismDimensional Games..

Amber: What?!

Dong Hee: I was playing games?

Amber: Lucky you are mr. cleverboy! (Slap Dong Hee cheek) Now go back to work!

Dong Hee: Ouch! What did you do that for?

Amber: (Walks away)

Dong Hee: I, I need to pee!

Amber: Help yourself! Doors lock!

Dong Hee: (Takes out his key) Thank you for reminding me! I got a key..


(Seoul, Korea)

(The scene was in a park. The camera revolve 180 degrees in Kris view of point)

(There are strange statues everywhere)

(People screams can be heard and some part of the city is dark)

Kris: (Looks shocks)

Ji Ho: What do you think?

Kris: What happened?

Ji Ho: (Stand beside Kris) Do you know.. What time is it?

Kris: No..

Ji Ho: 2014.. The night before valentine.. 45 minutes to come..

Kris: But.. But that is impossible.. We've just been here like.. An hour ago..

Ji Ho: Really? Well, this is what happens an hour later..

Kris: It's so quiet.. Like a ghost town.. And eerie screams.

Ji Ho: Echoes of the soon to be dead.. I can't help them.

Kris: Let's get the Exo then! He can help!

Ji Ho: He's too busy. Kris.. There's more to come..

Kris: You know about this!

Ji Ho: A star charter.. We chart the star.. We know the future!

Kris: Then tell me! What is going on?

Ji Ho: Look! (Pointing his hand at Kris)

Kris: (Looks confused)

Ji Ho: Your back.. 

Kris: (Turn around) It's a statue... What is wrong with it?

Ji Ho: Blink,,

Kris: Why? I am blink..king.

Ji Ho: Stop blinking..

Kris: (Blink several times) Impossible..

(Shows the statue moves everytime he blinks)

Ji Ho: No! Stop! They'll kill you.. It's Quavisiomention Parasites! It'll move when you look away from them! 

Kris: So.. not fair..

Ji Ho: I know! That's what invading this city.. The Timing Angel!

Kris: They don't stand a chance! They wouldn't know what had happen.. it's like all over again.. How can we stop them? I'm blinking.. Ah!

Ji Ho: There's no way to stop them.. Nice shirt,,

Kris: Thanks.. It's exo's brother..

Ji Ho: Oh.. The Exotics shirt.. I've been to ExoPlanet before.. Nice planet.

Kris; Um.. Can we save the talk for later?

Ji Ho: Of course.. Move a little bit to the left please..

Kris: Why?

Ji Ho: I said please..

Kris: Yeah.. And I asked.. Why?

Ji Ho; Could you just do what I say?

Kris: Fine! (Move to the left)

(In the Kris points of view, a strange light zoom across where he once standing and hit the angel where it disentigrate)

Ji Ho: There's more of them.. Probably a hundred.. And that hundred probably put the life of millions of innosence people at risk.. We have to move! Let's go!

Kris: Where are we going?

Ji Ho: Security Dead Vault.. The most top secret vault in the world..

Kris: I must say.. Wow! So proud to be Koreans.. Top secret vault.. (Follow Ji Ho)


(The scene changes to a 3D graphic showing the area around London 1888)

Mark; There are a few candy shop around Brixton and Westminster.. I'm not sure about here.. Let me have a look.. 

Luhan: Are you sure this will work? Looks pretty impossible to me..

Exo Who: Oh.. Luhan. Trust Mark.. He's an expert! Aren't you commander?!

Mark: Oh look here! There's some in central London itself.. Wait.. Oh look at that. Birmingham Palace.

Luhan: How charming.. Is she in there?

Exo Who: Gentlemen.. It's chocolate shop not some silly old palace.. No actually it's not.. Wait, did I mention that I almost marry Queen Victoria?

Mark: I never knew there will be so much chocolate shop in here. Hey! Are you sure you're not going to find this friends of yours?

Luhan: I think Kris probably going to have some fresh air..

Mark: That's what I thought.. But look what I found..

Exo Who: This chocolate shop.. Maybe it's on a disguise? Or could be a hoax? Just coincidence? NO! I don't believe there's such thing as coincedence..

Luhan: Yeah, could be a hoax.. Some practical joke.. (Laugh)

Exo Who: Except, that joke is not funny..

Mark: Look here!

(Everyone was watching the screen)

(The screen shows multiple coverage of CCTV shot around the house)

Luhan: You guys still uses CCTV even in 38th century..

Mark: It's the most important invention in history.. Help us a lot.. But.. Spoilers.

Exo Who: So.. What do you want to show us?

Mark: There's no sign of Kris anywhere.. Now let's check inside the house.

(There's a brief appearence of someone passing a camera but was cut off to the camera inside the house. The Exo notices it)

Mark: I can get all the CCTV online, except here..

Exo Who: That's strange.. We lost him there.. How did it happen..

Mark: Oh I don't know.. Might be electromagnetic cause.. This spaceship is full of electic radiation..

Luhan: Radiation?

Mark: Don't worry, it's harmless..

Exo Who: Everything is harmful..

Mark: My spaceship is harmless..

Exo Who: Your spaceship? MAMA!! That's the biggest lie of the century.. You stole it, and you will give it back..

Luhan: You remember..

Exo Who: Of course I do.. It's a time machine.. As you said, a broken one.. Stranded alone.. Oh.. the feel.. But! With pure intelligence..

Mark: Exo! I warn you, you are still under my mercy..

Exo Who: Considerate this then.. Why are you here?

Mark: (Look at Exo face) I crashed landed. The time stream became to zappy for me to continue..

Exo Who: So where exactly are you going?

Mark: 40th century..

Luhan: And you ended up here..

Mark: Obviously.. Can we get back to work now? That chocolate shop of yours.. (Turning back to the screen)

Luhan: There's so many of them..

Exo Who: You can fix it.. Why bother becoming a general?

Mark: Trust is an important word.. Cling on it.. bear with me, I'm not fooling around.. Your friends, I can sense danger..

(A knock on the main door)

Zack: Commander Mark! (Knock the door) Commander Mark! The General needs you! (Knock the door) This is urgent..

Mark: Oh dear, what could it possibly be?


(Lovex O' Chocolate Shop)

Amber: (Tidying up the shelves) Hm? (Picking up a box that contain a key in it)

*Don't Touch this Amber, important piece that needs further details*

Amber: Whoops! (Drops the box and continues her works)


(Emotion Laboratory)

John Park: (Strap Mr Valen inside the experiment chamber and tie him with the laser) I hope you won't be dissapointing me. (Turn his head to Gikwang) You! I really have enough of you. I will not tolerence with you anymore. Whatever it is, I will extract all your emotion tonight!

(The door opened)

Dong Hee: Did someone have been looking for me?

John Park: Where have you been? I need your assistant ages ago.. What do you think this is? Some sort of playground?

Dong Hee: Since when you have become too British? Who's the new guy?

John Park: Obviously you are hiding something from me.. What is it?

Dong Hee: I, I.. Don't you trust me? We have been friends for quite a long time now..

John Park: I don't see the point why you won't betray me.

Dong Hee: Why would I? There are no reasons for me to betray you. Please, do not dissappoint our Master. We need to revive him.

John Park: (Look at Dong Hee) You're right.. But! If you did, Mark my word, I will, I will kill you with my own bare hand!

Dong Hee: Yeah, that's cool! I'll mark it! So who's the new guy?

John Park: Look at the monitor! (Type in his keyboard) Our progress has slow down a little bit. And that bit has causes us to be way out of our schedule.

Dong Hee: I can see your point.. That Gikwang.. Is it? I've told you we need to shut his Emplifier emotions..

John Park: That's the problem.. I can't.

Dong Hee: Oh..

John Park: The good news is, there's a leak inside his amplifier emotion.. I can extract that but it is not enough.. 

Dong Hee: Hm..

John Park: So, I use the emotion radar and track that guy out.

Dong Hee: Where do you find him?

John Park: The Commander house. It's not that easy you know, with you wondering about and with people around him, I have to make a few calculation and risk to kidnap him.

Dong Hee: Ah.. well, what can I say?

John Park: And oh.. There's something interesting about the house, it's, it's smaller on the outside bigger in the inside.. Quite mysterious..

Dong Hee: Very mysterious.. Hey, do you think we can crack him open? So everything will paid off.

John Park: Let's give it a try! (Push the lever)

(The whole room screams)


(In front of a carriage)

Zack: The General wanted to see you.. Is that your friends?

Mark: Yes.. They came from far away..

Zack: Oh, I believe there won't be enough room, sir.

Mark: Are you mad? You can stand outside. Here.. I guarintee you won't fall.

Zack: But..

Mark: My friends need to sit.. They're from far away..

Exo Who: Oh yes I am.. In fact I'm from London.. Very far away.

Zack: London?

Luhan: Exo, we are in London..

Exo Who: Really? Oh.. Um.. I mean starship London.. Work for Captain Frank Royal.. Nice chap as you say..

Zack: Sorry?

Mark: I told you he's from far away..

Exo Who: Uh! There's also a place called London in New York.. Did you know that?

Mark: Could you please get in..

Exo Who: My pleasure.. (Step inside the carriage)

Luhan: Don't worry.. He's a bit nutter.. (Step inside the carriage)

Mark; You won't understand.. (Step inside the carriage)

Zack: But.. Sir.

Mark: You could stay if you want!

Zack: (Climb on the edge of the carriage) Oh dear.. God save the Queen!

(The carriage drove away)


(The carriage arrive in a street)

(There are a group of army and polices on site)

Johnson: Ah.. Commander Mark!

Mark: General! I see you have been quite busy lately. What's going on?

Johnson: I don't quite fully understand myself. From what I can concern, it's murder. All of them.

Mark: All? What do you mean all?

Exo Who: Murder? Uh! Exciting! We could see Scotland Yard work in front of our eyes..

Luhan: I thought he's not real..

Exo Who: Now you know, he is..

Luhan: Don't tell me Sherlock Holmes is real..

Johnson: Who are they?

Mark: My friends.. From far away..

Johnson: You know the protocol Commander..

Mark: I do.. I can ensure you sir, I trust them with my heart.

Luhan: Yeah.. Trust us. (Smile)

Johnson: I would rather for stranger to keep away from the crime site, Commander. It's an order..

Mark: Yes, sir..

Luhan: How unfair this is.. I would like to see what happened.

Exo Who: Well, at least we can walk around and investigate on our own..

Luhan: That sounds fun..

Exo Who: Oh yes it is! Come on!

(The scene changes to Johnson and Mark)

Yard: General!

Johnson: Inspector Yard! What's the progress so far?

Yard: Not much.. Everything is quite plain hard to describe. Even eyewitness account is unreliable.

Mark: Surely there must be a reason. Would you mind?

Yard: Go on..

Mark: (Step into the crime scene) Oh my goodness. What happened? All of them? 

Yard: Yes..

Mark: It can't be.. Why would they do that? How? This, this is impossible..

Johnson: Strangest case I have ever seen. I knew one of them.. Nice man. Now he's dead..

Mark: Inspector.. Any clues so far?

Yard: Afraid not, sir.

Mark: Hm.. Strange.. Very strange indeed. (Squatting) Oh, what's this?

Johnson: Commander..

Mark: Yes, sir!

Johnson: Come, follow me. We need to have a close meeting. I've invited a few and it seems they've arrived.

Mark: Dear me, this is a terrible case.


(Emotion laboratory)

(The room was filled with electricity)

John Park: What did I tell you eh? It paid off!

Dong Hee: Unbelievable!

(The camera turns to Mr Valen who is screaming)

Dong Hee: Everything! They have increased rapidly. 

John Park: He have so much emotion. I wonder what he did for life? Now, for that little brat from the future.. If I could increase the volume..

Dong Hee: No, no! It'll be more denser.. Try to activten the electron inside the electrical pulse, then we can increase the volume.

John Park: Very well.. (Push a few buttons) And.. (Pull a lever) Walla!

(The camera shows briefly to the painful expression of each and everyone in the room)

(Both man laughed)

John Park: I could feel him! At last! He's revived! The Ultimate Love is revived!

(The laboratory was chaotic. Wind burst out of nowhere than suddenly an electricity hole shaped like a funnel appeared)

Dong Hee: Is that?

(A strange grumble sound was heard)

John Park: Come here, Master! YOU, ARE, WELCOME!!

(The scene changes outside the shop and a loud strange growls was heard)

Ultimate Love: I AM REVIVED!! *ROAAAR*


(END OF THE ULTIMATE LOVE)

Oh yeah.. Things about to get real

 

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