Exposed

Spectrum

 

Prompt: A metaphor for yourself.

 

It sits atop a table, open to everyone around,

Dazzling, simple, alluring.

Any who approach it will marvel,

Marvel in its beauty,

Marvel in its fine crafting,

Yet this box remains locked,

A tightly locked world of secrets,

One of which everyone around

Has the key;

The answer.

 

Indeed, this box is a beautiful one.

A curious one.

But didn't curiosity kill the cat?

 

 

 

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ant12345 #1
Chapter 4: I like this chapter..
allyouneedislove #2
OMG, amazing!
Megane183 #3
Chapter 9: I love those you've written playfully.. Specially the CL-the bear lover.. I imagine her face in shock.. The last part was really good.. I can feel Dara's timidness, stubborn nature not admitting anything but it shows that she truely loves.. Lol~ author-nim i don't know to whom you wrote the other chapter, but I felt as a reader that its me.. Hahaha.. *smacks meh head*
VIPIKACHU #4
Chapter 9: ^cries a river^ that was so emotional :'(
recrecrec #5
Chapter 9: You're a one shot specialist! Wooh! daebak!! n_n
Malfunction #6
1000th karma point to you! WOO HOOOO!
lonelybluemonster #7
Chapter 5: Oh wow. I love this chapter! I think it's my favorite so far. The imagerery, oh the imagery. <3 The way you describe the path... beautiful and colorful but broken. The speaker, withered inside and out. The hope, the longing for the memories that were. The will to carry on when there's nothing but broken pieces left.

Ah~~ very very very good!! Thank you for sharing this! ^_^
GBaby06 #8
Chapter 3: This is just so emotional! I really liked the idea and if you could develop it more it would be fantastic!!! Love it!
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