The Moment

Spectrum

 

Prompt: The exact moment of a change from season to season in nature.

 

       I take a small sip of my cola, listening to the popping of the bubbles and the low squeak of my gulp. Breathing out with content, a light smile alights my lips as a thin cloud of white escapes from between them and fades into the brisk air.

       I pull my empty hand out of my jean pocket where it's been digging, and slowly touch my fingertips together, feeling the coolness as contact is broken. I lift my arm up to the moon, squinting a little. My fingers stretch out and I tilt my head, observing the silhouette of the oddly-shaped structure I call my hand.

       My eyes focus on the tip of my longest finger, observing every detail as they trail down to the middle of the short length. I bend my fingers a little, watching the small joint. Then my eyes continue down, down to the knuckle and down to the back of the hand. Finally, to the wrist.

       I hear an imaginary ticking of the clock as the digital numbers of my watch become clear in my vision. I whisper to myself, ignoring the visible small puffs of breath, 5. 4. 3. 2. 1.

       0.

       All the numbers on the display change at once into a 00:00:00. The wind seems to blow a little harder. The air seems to feel a little colder. The moon seems to shine a little brighter.

       And the world seems to be a little more beautiful.

 

 

 

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Author's Note:
Honestly, I really don't like
this piece of writing.
But I hope you enjoy it anyway! Thanks!

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ant12345 #1
Chapter 4: I like this chapter..
allyouneedislove
#2
OMG, amazing!
Megane183 #3
Chapter 9: I love those you've written playfully.. Specially the CL-the bear lover.. I imagine her face in shock.. The last part was really good.. I can feel Dara's timidness, stubborn nature not admitting anything but it shows that she truely loves.. Lol~ author-nim i don't know to whom you wrote the other chapter, but I felt as a reader that its me.. Hahaha.. *smacks meh head*
VIPIKACHU
#4
Chapter 9: ^cries a river^ that was so emotional :'(
recrecrec
#5
Chapter 9: You're a one shot specialist! Wooh! daebak!! n_n
Malfunction
#6
1000th karma point to you! WOO HOOOO!
lonelybluemonster #7
Chapter 5: Oh wow. I love this chapter! I think it's my favorite so far. The imagerery, oh the imagery. <3 The way you describe the path... beautiful and colorful but broken. The speaker, withered inside and out. The hope, the longing for the memories that were. The will to carry on when there's nothing but broken pieces left.

Ah~~ very very very good!! Thank you for sharing this! ^_^
GBaby06 #8
Chapter 3: This is just so emotional! I really liked the idea and if you could develop it more it would be fantastic!!! Love it!