Broken

Spectrum

 

       I feel broken. The fragile shards of life that are gathered at my feet. More and more trail behind as I step with cautious feet along the path decorated with harsh, beautiful glass.

       I look behind and feel lost at the sight of shattered dreams and withered hopes. But I feel overwhelming longing and trek back to the beginning, the beginning of everything. I find resolve as I bend down and extend a shaky hand to the seemingly untouchable colors.

       Slowly, I wrap thin fingers around dimming and darkening memories. I pick up the pieces of myself.

       And I feel strong again.

 

 

 

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ant12345 #1
Chapter 4: I like this chapter..
allyouneedislove
#2
OMG, amazing!
Megane183 #3
Chapter 9: I love those you've written playfully.. Specially the CL-the bear lover.. I imagine her face in shock.. The last part was really good.. I can feel Dara's timidness, stubborn nature not admitting anything but it shows that she truely loves.. Lol~ author-nim i don't know to whom you wrote the other chapter, but I felt as a reader that its me.. Hahaha.. *smacks meh head*
VIPIKACHU
#4
Chapter 9: ^cries a river^ that was so emotional :'(
recrecrec
#5
Chapter 9: You're a one shot specialist! Wooh! daebak!! n_n
Malfunction
#6
1000th karma point to you! WOO HOOOO!
lonelybluemonster #7
Chapter 5: Oh wow. I love this chapter! I think it's my favorite so far. The imagerery, oh the imagery. <3 The way you describe the path... beautiful and colorful but broken. The speaker, withered inside and out. The hope, the longing for the memories that were. The will to carry on when there's nothing but broken pieces left.

Ah~~ very very very good!! Thank you for sharing this! ^_^
GBaby06 #8
Chapter 3: This is just so emotional! I really liked the idea and if you could develop it more it would be fantastic!!! Love it!