ღ Review | My Fear is Betrayal

rєvíєwєr: Myungiesshi

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ღ Title(3/5): The title relates to the story but it wasn't that attractive (to me)

ღ Poster&Background(4/5): It's very pretty! I love it! ^^ You're really talented in making posters! ^^ It suits the storyline perfectly! A sad girl standing by the edge of the bed, with dark colours used!

ღ Forword&Description(5/10): Well it was just one line so I didn't really attract me that much.

ღ Plot’s uniqueness(14/20): It's pretty unique, I like it. Revolve in friendship and betrayal :3

ღ Flow(15/20): Since the story is only a chapter with a really short writing, I couldn't really rate it but it's pretty good!

ღ Grammar&Spelling(19/20): They all make sense and I can understand you perfectly. Your spelling use is perfect as well! Good job!

ღ Words(7/10): Well, since the story is short, I don't feel anything that will bore me, more like curious and wanting for more! :3 The vocabulary used is pretty good, using formal language and everyday vocabulary.

ღ Interest&Enjoyment(8/10): I enjoy this story a lot but I'm not really into friendship + betrayal sooo..

ღ Overall Grade: (75/100): that's a really good mark! I am pretty strict in marking and this is the highest mark I've ever given someone! ^^ Keep up the good work and hwaiting! *fist pump*

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