Mission Like A Forbidden Love.

Description

Two different worlds had been led by the strong word called fate. A stunning guy named Yang Yoseob was asked to change the scruffy life of a girl known as Kim Seul Hyo. Yoseob, known as Agent Yang,  had been working in a not-that-much popular business handled by his godfather in Seoul. A significant mission was given to him and that mission was to change the messy life of Kim Seul Hyo.  But how will Yoseob be able to reform the life of Seul Hyo? 

 

Methods on How to Change Kim Seul Hyo:

 

1. Protect the girl from such foul people. Seul Hyo always got bruises and hurt made by her greedy stepfather. He frequently flog the young girl whenever he needs something unimportant like money for gambling. 

 

2. Be friends with her. Being friends with her is one of the best ways to know her attitude and most important is, to change her life. 

 

3. Date her or do something that can make her lips curve a tender smile. Kim Seul Hyo doesn’t often smile, she only shows her smile to someone close to her, Lee KiSeop.

 

4. Take her away from her stepfather who always tortures her. The very best and perfect instrument to alter her oh-so-called messy life. 

 

Last but not the least - This way is really strictly forbidden and not included in the methods above:

 

5. Never and don’t fall in love with her or else you might not accomplish the mission. If you fall in love with her, persons including me would block your way and strike off your communication with each other. Once your mission is accomplished, you can now get rid of her.  

Foreword

It was just a mission that Yoseob has never expected: A mission to change the messy life of a girl known as Kim Seul Hyo. But the discussed mission that was given to Yoseob was a failed not an accomplished mission. He suddenly fell in love with the 18 years old girl, he couldn’t control his self anymore thats why he just let his heart open for Seul Hyo.

 

Both of them had a feelings for each other but yet the entire world was against them. People that they have known for a long time were seperating them from each other. Unexpected changes had occurred around them and so as persons. Both Yoseob and Seul Hyo tried to escape from them but 2 self-righteous persons didn’t easily give up on pulling them apart. 

 

Their love for each other turned into a Forbidden Love and the settled mission became a failed one. It was a Mission Like A Forbidden Love. 

 

Like what others say: “If you greatly desire something, have the guts to stake everything on obtaining it.”

 

TITLE:  Mission Like A Forbidden Love.

GENRE: Romance. Angst. A bit of Comedy. PG 15 for MINOR  Scenes

CHARACTERS: 

- Yang Yoseob.

- Kim Seul Hyo.

- Lee KiSeop.

- Bae Suzy. 

- Other unexpected characters from each KPOP Group. 

 

 

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MRC-KKB is back with another simple Fan Fiction! Erm? Hello reader! :D After thinking of this FF for a long time, I have finally got the nerves to write this well-thought Fan Fiction. I have written a lot of U-KISS Fan Fictions but this time, I decided to write a Yang Yoseob Fan Fiction. Oh well. He’s my bias in the far-famed group called B2ST. Both poster and story are made by me. If you find a story that is somewhat related to mine, please think that it is just coincident. ;A; 

 

 Please do subscribe and read to know what is written inside. I would do my very best to make this Fan Fiction seminal. Comments inspire me a lot. :) 

 

THIS IS NOT A FAN FICTION. IT IS MARKED AS RATED H BECAUSE OF SOME FOUL LANGUAGES THAT ARE NOT SUITABLE TO SOME OF YOU. 

 

I LOVE YOU ALL. MUCH LOVE. ♥

 

DATE STARTED: 11/04/10. 

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Rini6189 #1
Chapter 9: It would've turned out to be a great story if you continue it. The last chapter did leave us hanging. This is one of those original works that I enjoy reading. Since you've lost your touch for writing this fic, it has to be discontinued. I understand.

There's got to be a reason why Yoseob didn't arrive on time to meet Seulhyo for their date in the amusement park. When he didn't make any sudden movements to give away his position, it sounded like he's aware that something bad is going to happen. If not, he just got there late because he got held up. A good development between Yoseob and Seulhyo would've happened as they become close.
kiseop1 #2
i ship kiseop & suzy <33
kiseop1 #3
i ship kiseop & suzy <33
kpopmusiclover #4
Pls update soon ^^ I love the story and enjoyed reading it ^^
Rini6189 #5
No problem! It's good that you find my feedback to be encouraging and helpful. That's actually what I'm going for in giving reviews.

Not all readers/subscribers comment. Some of them just sit back and enjoy the story without ever commenting. This shouldn't discourage you from writing, though. However, it'd be nice to get some comments from the readers to let the author know that his/her work is appreciated. I'm one of those who are open about expressing thoughts and opinions about the story after reading it.

I'm already used to Yoseob as the lead guy in this fic. I don't mind it staying just the way it is now. When you get around to using the new characters that you have in mind to replace the current ones, I'll learn to get used to the change. I look forward to seeing the continuation of this fic.

~ Rini
Rini6189 #6
It doesn't seem likely that Yoseob had planned for Kiseop to show up at the scene in his place since he's not willing to associate with him after seeing what he'd done to her a few days ago. At least Kiseop's doing one nice thing for Seulhyo to make up for his misconduct. To hide in the shadows without being seen, he is doing his job of looking out for her in case something bad happens.

You've ended chapter six nicely with a cliffhanger to leave the readers looking forward to more of the story to come.

In the first couple chapters, it sounds awkward in some sentences with the misusage of certain words. There's this one sentence in chapter one where "penetration" is not the right term to refer to a payment or an amount of money on hand the one gets on a regular basis. In Seulhyo's case, it's proper to refer to it as an "allowance." When you're not sure about the meaning of a word, it's best to look it up in the dictionary. Even I use it sometimes whenever I come across a word that doesn't sound familiar to me while I read.
Rini6189 #7
The way that he reacted upon seeing her excited response at seeing Jaejoong's ab flash shows that he's jealous of him--wishing that she'd only look at him and no other guy. Although she had to get Sulli to leave Yoseob alone since she's his date, it's a possibility that she's jealous inside if she's starting to develop feelings for him at this point without being aware of it. Yoseob is sweet to be there for her in her time of need. The courageous act he did that night to fend off Joon without getting harmed himself is impressive. He is well-trained for his role to pull that off. It's interesting that Yoseob can go from being a comic relief to a focused, serious person and vice versa. Kiseop is supportive to help Seulhyo out whenever she's injured throughout the years. For him to do that to his long-time best friend on the spot from harboring feelings of love for her all these years, Kiseop must be overwhelmed emotions that he couldn't think properly. He does feel enraged inside at seeing her together with Yoseob. It must be hard for you to portray Yoseob as a fierce person because of his cute, childlike, perky appearance. That doesn't make him someone to be taken seriously. This seems to be what you're mainly showing to the readers about his character--like his playfulness and winks directed toward Seulhyo. Infatuation is the proper term to describe the sensation that Seulhyo was experiencing as soon as she set her eyes on Kikwang. Jealousy is obviously what Yoseob was experiencing from seeing their exchange. It's not as strong compared to what she feels toward Yoseob whenever she's near him. It seemed that Kikwang was testing Yoseob to see whether he feels strongly about Seulhyo. When Yoseob didn't show up for their date at Lotte World, it makes me wonder what kept him busy. Kiseop might have overheard Yoseob making plans with Seulhyo in the school hallway to know where to find her. That's one possibility that is plausible.
Rini6189 #8
I just found this fic by clicking on "Random Story." It sounds interesting from what I read in the forewords. So, I decided to check it out. Because of the obstacles that stand in their way, it'd be challenging for Seulhyo and Yoseob to maintain a deep, intimate relationship with each other. Though, Yoseob is the one who has most of the pressure working as a secret agent and is not allowed to fall in love with the person he's helping on his mission. The conflict of this story seems to be the characters versus society hence the "forbidden love" thing. On Yoseob's part, family is also an issue. Having no choice in the matter to get out of being betrothed to Suzy in an arranged marriage seems to be too much for him that he decided to run away from home to escape his family's pressures. If they're concerned that he's not around at home anymore, they'd think to look for him. There might be a possibility of Yoseob seeing them and Suzy later. Seulhyo also has a family issue revolving around her cruel, money-obsessed stepfather. This is a bad environment to be living in. We'll see how Yoseob will get her out of this one.

At first impression, Suzy seems to be like one of those typical spoiled, arrogant rich kids. Yoseob must prefer to not marry without love, so he resorted to run away from home. Since his heart is not in it, there's no point of him sticking around to go through with it. Their encounter in the school hallway is one unexpected surprise. It's not as though Yoseob intended to steal a kiss from her since it's apparently an accident. The sight of him swiping his tongue over his lips muse be enticing enough to get her mind to wander where it shouldn't be. xD Yoseob must want Seulhyo to remember him by labeling himself under her list of contacts as "My First Kiss." He was behaving like a child when he cried over his broken cellphone accessory.
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