Night Swimming.

Mannequin

While waiting for Minho, the guys were talking about him.

“His late again.”, Jonghyun smirked.
“Maybe his busy starring at Soa.”, Taemin giggled.
“Ha! Right Taemin!”, Jonghyun laughed; high five with Taemin.
“Why? What happened yesterday?”, Onew and Key asked, curious.
“Oh because we bought a swimsuit for Soa yesterday. Then, when the saleslady fitted it to Soa, Minho was like fell in love at Soa.”, Taemin laughed.
Jonghyun too.
“Oh really?”, Key laughed.
“I wonder what Soa looks like with that swimsuit?”, Onew said curiously with a wide smile.
“Yah! Onew! Don’t tell me you like that mannequin?”, Jonghyun said.
“Yeh! You’re right Jonghyun!”, Onew smiling at Jonghyun.
“Eeew~”, Jonghyun smirked.
“You’re so mean Jonghyun!”, Taemin laughed.
“I think only Jonghyun doesn’t like Soa.”, Key said.
“I know right!”, Onew said.
“Well, look! She’s a mannequin. What can we get to that mannequin?!”, Jonghyun smirked.
“Oh well Jonghyun! Ahjussi is good at making mannequin. His the best maker of the mannequin in the whole world!”, Taemin said.
“Right Taemin!”, Key and Onew said.
“Whatever guys~ She’s really look like a human but the truth is she’s just a mannequin!”, Jonghyun said.
“Whatever Jonghyun!”, Key, Onew, and Taemin said the same time.

Then Minho came atlast.
“You took so long Minho!”, Taemin said.
“It’s traffic.”, Minho said.
“Oh really?”, Onew said.
Minho nodded. “Why are you guys haven’t started yet? Are you guys waiting for me?”, He asked.
“Obviously~”, Jonghyun said. “So where’s Soa?”, He asked.
“Oh yeah~ I ask your maid Taemin to dress up Soa.”, Minho said.
“That’s okay.”, Taemin said.
“I’ll start the barbecue now.”, Onew said.
“Let’s go Key!”, Taemin pushed Key to the pool.
They laughed, then Soa came.
“Thank you~”, Taemin said to the maid.
“Wow!”, Key surprised.
“Woah~”, Onew too.
“I told you guys. She’s so y huh?”, Taemin giggled.
“Yeh~”, Onew and Key said, jaw dropping.
“Yah! Stop that!”, Minho said, waving at their faces.
“Okay sir!”, Onew, Key, and Taemin laughed.

Then Minho slapped Jonghyun’s head.
“Yah! Why did you that?!”, Jonghyun yelled.
“Stop starring at her! Let’s go!”, Minho pushed Jonghyun to the pool too.
“I knew that Jonghyun was just denying that he likes Soa, too.”, Key said.
“I know right Key!”, Onew laughed.
Jonghyun smirked.
“What are you guys talking about?”, Minho said curiously.
“It’s nothing Minho.”, Taemin smiled.

Now, they’re eating.
“By the way starting tomorrow, I have work again.”, Minho said.
“Aww~”, Taemin pouted.
“So I wouldn’t see Soa for a long time again.”, Onew frowned.
Key laughed.
Jonghyun smirked.
“We will still see Soa, you know, in the magazine.”, Key said.
“Oh yeah.. huh?”, Onew smiled widely.
Taemin laughed.
“Why are you guys so crazy at Soa?!”, Minho asked.
“She’s so beautiful!”, Key, Onew, and Taemin said at the same time.
Jonghyun was just looking at them, shaking his head.
Minho smirked and sighed.
“I hope she’s a human so that we know what she thinks of us right now.”, Onew smiled, looking at Soa.
“Stop dreaming Onew!”, Jonghyun said.
“Then, stop denying too, Jonghyun!”, Onew said.
“Yah! Yah! Stop that both of you!”, Minho pointed at them.
Onew and Jonghyun smirked.

“I’m going now Taemin.”, Minho said.
“Okay, be safe you two.”, Taemin said.
“I will, thanks!”, Minho said; hugged all of them.
“Bye Soa!”, Onew waved.
Minho smirked. “See you guys next time!”, He waved.


Key, Onew, Taemin, and Jonghyun looked at him.

“Are you okay Minho?”, Key asked.
“You look like you’ve seen a ghost?”, Jonghyun smirked.
Minho shook his head. “No-nothing. D-don’t mind me, I’ll go now! Bye~”, He said.
“Okay?”, Key said unsurely.

Minho left now...

“What happened to him?”, Onew asked.
“I have no idea.”, Key said.
“He was looking at Soa and he looked surprise.”, Onew said.
“Yeah~”, Taemin said.
Jonghyun just shrugged.

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EXO_Luva
#1
hwaiting ~
park_jenny #2
Chapter 32: Please!!! Sequel
I wanna know what happened next....
Shiningshawol91 #3
Chapter 31: OMG cliff hanger ending alsdkfjalsdkfjasdasldk;l;alj everything was so good!!! You're overall plot was SUPER unique I've never read any stories like this before! I LOVED IT!!!!
NINIvaj3 #4
SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cookiesx3
#5
ahh i hope it really is Soa!! >_< soo cuteee <33 more more!!!  sequelll! :D
Rini6189
#6
One look at the title and I'm reminded of a 1987 movie, which is also entitled "Mannequin." (It's a great American classic.) Though, the movie's storyline is different from yours. The concept of a mannequin coming alive is similar. It seems original since I haven't read a fanfic with a storyline such as this one. Symbolically, a mannequin illustrates the idea of what true love is: a person staying by one's side through thick and thin and is faithful enough to never leave his/her side. It's something that lasts forever. Anyone would idealistically consider wanting to have a special someone like that by his/her side.<br />
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There are some comedic and dramatic moments along with sweet/light-hearted moments shared between Minho and Soa and his friends. Onew, Jonghyun, Key, and Taemin are a funny bunch. He's lucky to have such friends who stood by him and do their best in cheering him up when he's feeling down. xD The bathroom thing is hilarious. Soa coming alive has made a great impact on Minho's life. It is a nice change for him...being influenced by Soa's pure-heartedness. Krystal making an appearance didn't really help matters but stirred up tension. What she'd shown towards Minho doesn't seem to be love--more like an obsession. She's just doing it for herself without considering the feelings of the other party involved. That's cliche in most romantic dramas for the bad girl to be portrayed this way. Minho's love for Soa had helped him through it all--facing any difficulty that comes his way. It's proven that love is a powerful element. The way that the story ended makes me expect more to come that'll hopefully reach a happy ending. At least Minho gets to see his love alive. A sequel would be good to conclude things.<br />
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The actual term for what you call a "picture machine" in one chapter where Soa and the guys went out to spend a day of fun together is "photo booth."
chas_ssmentrok #7
Chpt 31:<br />
WHAT KIND OF ENDING WAS THAT?! :))<br />
OMAGASH I WANT MORE!!! XD
chas_ssmentrok #8
Chpt 9:<br />
i agree...CUTE taemin <3
chas_ssmentrok #9
Chpt 4:<br />
:)) I wonder wot Soa did that made minho like that
favourgrace
#10
amazing story~<br />
<br />
b-hoh, wait.<br />
How do you pronounce her name?<br />
<br />
~So-ah<br />
or<br />
<br />
~So-wah<br />
or<br />
<br />
~Swa? :P<br />
<br />
I know I'm stupid