by: ChoiYongSeok

Title — 5/5

The title is somewhat great and it was all original and it matched the storyline well.

Description/Foreword — 9/10

Originality/Creativity — 8/10

Wow, It was super original. I've never read or heard this story basically before.

Plot — 10/10

The plot is a great and it was all descripted.

Grammar/Spelling — 6/10

The words' spellings were all correct but I found out that there were some 'typos' and I also didn't mind the grammar but I know that you will still improve on your grammar. It can't be seen too since the flow of story is all great.

Writing Skill/Flow — 20/20

Your story was just plain and simple. Well, it wasn't to the point of how your characters smoothly flow the story it was your blinding technique and I really like it. Even though, It was only ordinary. I love how you expressed your writings according to the characters.

Apperance — 12/20

Overall Enjoyment — 8/10

I really enjoyed your fic like alot.

Extra/Comments — 3/5

I can't say anything anymore since I've said it all but the dots. Oh well, Everything as well. Good job!

Overall  Total:  80/100