by: SHINEESuju4ever

Title — 1/5

The title is just too revealing. I felt like you just gave the main plot like the OC is going to date someone in SHINee in there, there, and there. Yes, I know that I like twist, turns and too over cliche stories but it just your title too long and it can make your readers bored on it but still it's all captivating!

Description/Foreword — 9/10

Originality/Creativity — 6/10

To be complely honest, your plot doesn't fall into the category of being very original; there has many several stories out there that are of a similar style and nature as yours. Otherwise, It might be change if you flow and blend your story.

Plot — 7/10

The plot is a daebak. I really like it.

Grammar/Spelling — 6/10

I can see minimal mistakes, You can reread your story to change it afterall, Like saterday.

Writing Skill/Flow — 15/20

The flow of the story is great and captivating not to preferring to the character and the person who will she dating, on the place and etc. It might increase more so, Keep doing in that job!

Apperance — 12/20

Not to cliche though, I can see that the OC's picture is not clearly cropped. The building's windows (?) are not fixed. The poster is really rushed by the designer (I guess. please don't kill me.) Otherwise, It was all great but I can't give a satisying points.

Overall Enjoyment — 7/10

I enjoy it alot since I live to faint on SHINee before and now. Otherwise, Your story is great!

Extra/Comments — 2/5

The spelling should be change. The title is just expanded.  Oh well, Thank you for choosing me and I hope a great fame will go and make your story get popular. That's all, Your story is great! again. o u o;

Overall  Total:  65/100