by: I_RatU

Title — 2/5

Hmm..Not too small not too long, Just expected a normal one. I'm not that good to give enough a 5.

Description/Foreword — 5/10

Originality/Creativity — 10/10

As you say, You get the idea about an Anime but I've seen it in a unique style by it. Not only to the way you write, The way you flow the story in pace.

Plot — 8/10

Plot is the best.

Grammar/Spelling — 9/10

Both your grammar and spelling are alright.

Writing Skill/Flow — 18/20

Your story is a daebak! Not only to mention, It was flowed great. It really since that you really think about the concept you are doing!

Apperance — 5/20

Overall Enjoyment — 10/10

Yeah, I enjoyed your story. On how, You flowed it matching with your characters expression. It was Captivating!

Extra/Comments — 3/5

Even though, It's a one-shot. I was all lacked. I mean, I just been gotten something that makes me go again in the story as well. After all, Good Job! Thank you for choosing me and I hope your readers like it very much!

Overall  Total:  78/100