Woebegone

by: Zining

Title — 4/5

Wow, I think it's unique.

Description/Foreword — 8/10
Aww, it hurts you know when reading your foreword page. I am so afraid to read the story. Huhu^^. 
But that really relates with the story which is so good!

Originality/Creativity — 8/10
Wow. Really creative. It really hurts reading it. You are really good at story like this. Huhu^^ It is not really cliché and I find it a bit different from other sad stories.

Plot — 8/10
I swear I will call you a cruel author if you end the story at chapter 4. Chinja! I think the plot is just nice and so heartbreaking...

Grammar/Spelling — 8/10
There are only few mistakes that I could spot, satisfying (:

Writing Skill/Flow — 17/20
Your writing is really sentimental in this story. It makes me really into it and my heart did break, ya know! – which means you did a good job for bringing us into the story. Sometimes it also quite complicated as your sentences are more like poetry or something like that. Flow is just nice but maybe a bit too fast as it is a short story.
 

Apperance — 17/20
The poster is really beautiful! But somehow, I think it didn’t really portray the story. If you able to make your foreword page nicer, I think it would be better but don’t worry about it.

Overall Enjoyment — 9/10
I really enjoy the story. I was so into it. My heart did break into pieces. /crying/
 

Extra/Comments — 4/5
I hope you can come with something like this next time but make it more interesting. Plan well and don’t rush. You’re a good writer and can be better. I love reading it. Can’t wait for the bonus chapter!

Overall  Total:  83/100

Reviewer: Zasstar

Reviewed in: 01.02.13