A Gift

She's Mine
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“So you’re really moving in with her?”

“I just said that a minute ago, didn’t I?”

“It’s seriously serious.”

“Dude, listen to yourself. You sound… off.”

Siwon rolled his eyes from his spot in Donghae’s room. “I hope you know that I’m not throwing a fit because I trust you.”

“Oppa, as much as I love you, you have no right to throw a fit because you’re not her father anyway.” Tiffany patiently reminded him from her spot by his side. “And that goes for you too, Heechul oppa and Leeteuk oppa.”

Heechul raised his hands in defense. “I didn’t say anything!”

“But you looked like you were about to.” A beat passed. “And no, that look isn’t going to work on me.”

Donghae let out a sigh as he zipped up his second suitcase. “I was hoping I could pack in peace…”

Taeyeon kept Leeteuk silent with a pointed look before she turned her attention to the younger man. “How much are you taking with you?”

“Mostly clothes and a few valuables.” He answered. “I’m still maintaining this house even if I’m moving in with her.”

“How come she didn’t move here instead?” Sungmin asked. “I mean, it’d make more sense… at least to me. Her house doesn’t really have the best of memories lately.”

“I really don’t know ‘cause I haven’t really asked. Maybe she wants to make new, better memories?” Donghae shrugged. “I’m considering getting another house for the two of us though depending on how things go.”

Sunny arched an eyebrow. “Another house?”

He nodded. “I think we all know it’s a lie if I say that her house is completely safe.”

“You’re right.” Siwon let out a sigh of his own. “When do you plan to start looking?”

“I have to talk to her about it first then we’ll see how it goes.” Donghae answered, bringing the suitcase down from the bed to the floor. “Well, that’s the last of it for now.”

“Good.” Leeteuk fished his keys from his pocket. “Let’s go and see what everyone else is up to.”

o-o-o-o-o

“Can you guys keep it down?” Kibum hollered from Sooyoung’s living room. “We’re kind of planning a wedding down here! Keep it down!”

“Please!” Yoona added.

“Sorry!” Sooyoung yelled back, glaring at her so-called helpers. “Look at what you’ve done.”

Seohyun smiled sheepishly. “We’re sorry, unnie. We’re just so excited that you listened to our suggestion. I’m sure you and Donghae are going to live together so well and–”

“Leave us out of this.” Eunhyuk moved away from the ladies in the room.

“Yeah, please do.” Kyuhyun agreed eagerly.

Hyoyeon rolled her eyes at them. “So have you two decided on how you’re going to share chores and whatever?”

“Well, he kind of forced me to let him do the dishes.” Sooyoung ignored as Kyuhyun commented on how whipped Donghae was, earning him a painful elbow to the ribs. “Cleaning is on a clean after yourself basis and we’re sharing cooking duties… I guess that’s about it.”

“Do you think this room is set, unnie?” Seohyun asked.

“I think so.” She glanced at the open cabinet on the other side of the room. Half of it had her clothes while the other half was empty. “If we need another cabinet, we can always buy.”

“That’s true.” Kyuhyun was about to say something when the doorbell cut him off. “Maybe that’s them.”

“I’ll get it!” Yoona yelled from downstairs.

Hyoyeon canted her head to the side. “That’s odd. Doesn’t Donghae oppa have a key?”

                Before anyone could say anything to that, they heard a loud scream from downstairs followed by Kibum’s frazzled yells. No one really had time to process anything as they came running down the stairs, coming to a screeching halt outside the front door. Yoona’s shaking form was wrapped in Kibu

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Fangirlforlife #1
Chapter 14: Author nim I'm dying because of that clip hanger
Omona_
#2
Chapter 15: What have you decided?
Va_asianloverz
#3
Chapter 1: please update soon
Omona_
#4
Chapter 15: I don't think it really needs rewriting, but if you try to read it again and happen to get some ideas to how to improve it to fit more to your liking, then do rewrite it. I myself am very content with this story, but I know that not being happy with your writing really takes away inspiration. Either way, I'm just really happy you're not deleting this ^^
Jamilah21 #5
Chapter 14: Oh don't you dare to delete this author!!! Sorry if I'm that really rude but I can't help it this fic is getting better and best!! Please the storyline is getting me into it~! You're awesome authornim~! Please update soon! ^_^
TurbulenceTenshi #6
Dear Flow19,
I, as the others, would like to ask you not to get rid of this story. However, if you are not satisfied with it... well, I know what that feels like too. It may be a lot of work, but if you want to change it, then perhaps you should. I do not feel that is necessary, but I am not the one with the story burning inside of me. I do know, though, that you likely have put a lot of work into it already, and that if you delete it, you may regret it. It may still itch at your mind and you may mourn the waste/loss of it. But, maybe you have sufficient distance from it now that this is not a concern. Whatever you decide, I will support your decision.
Take care,
Ashlee
nindindi
#7
Chapter 14: please dont delete this fic unnie, i'll always rereading this fic when i miss your fic to update hehehehe
chosandy1
#8
Chapter 14: I am totally agree with @Omona, don't delete the story. Its hard to fine story base on sooyoung and donghae parring. keep update
Omona_
#9
Chapter 14: DO NOT DELETE THIS! Hey, a new reader here that happened to read it all in one go, hi. I'm not aggressive, I just love this story. Please, don't delete it. Rewrite if you have to, which I don't feel necessary at all, but you can't take this story away from us! It's awesome!