Distant

She's Mine
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               Donghae sighed more times than he cared to count ever since he and his friends all gathered in their usual hangout bar near their homes. Scanning over his friends scattered all over the place, he couldn’t help not notice the absence of one tall brunette… the same spunky and witty shikshin of their group who recently became very distant towards them. Why? No one knew. They all did their best to reach out to their friend but it seemed that she wanted to push them away everytime they tried, lying through her teeth about how she was okay and there was nothing to worry about.

“The point of holding a cue stick is for you to use it to play billiards.”

“I was intending to use it for a modeling stint.” He replied without missing a beat, rolling his eyes.

Leeteuk smiled wryly. “I know what you’re thinking of, Hae. And I’m with you there. I wish I could do a damn thing to get Soo to open up.”

“She wouldn’t normally do this when she has problems.” The younger man could only sigh once again. It had become a habit of his it seemed. “What is it that she can’t tell us?”

“That’s what I’ve been wondering too.” Hyoyeon joined the conversation, ditching Eunhyuk temporarily because she knew that the two men were talking about the leggy brunette. “I’m one of her best friends. She should at least tell me.”

“Everyone’s worried about Soo. Hell, I’m as clueless as ever even if I call myself her brother.” Siwon appeared beside Donghae, holding his and Tiffany’s drinks. “But for now, let’s just try to enjoy. We can get answers from her tomorrow. I’ll even strangle her if she doesn’t tell me.”

"So much for diplomacy, Wonnie."

                And with that, the mini gathering dispersed. Hyoyeon went back to her boyfriend’s side, Siwon handed Tiffany her drink, Leeteuk went back to playing pool while Donghae ditched his cue stick and retreated to the bar stools near the pool table. The brown haired man still couldn’t calm himself about the whole Sooyoung issue. There was something wrong; he was damn sure of it. But he just couldn’t figure out what.

                It took Donghae a good half hour to finally make up his mind on what to do. Grabbing his jacket from the nearby stool and mumbling a vague ‘I’ll go ahead’ to his friends, he rushed out of the bar and into his car, intending to head to Sooyoung’s house as fast as the traffic rules would allow him. He really couldn’t wait until the next day. It was far too long. He was worrying about Sooyoung and he wanted answers now.

                Donghae had just gotten out of the door when he reached her home when he heard a loud, piercing scream from somewhere around him. His eyes widened, knowing that it was Sooyoung who was screaming. Another scream confirmed that she was indeed inside the house. Running up to the front door, he searched the bottom of every pot in the area knowing that she kept one of her spare keys there. Finally finding it after lifting what seemed to be the fifteenth pot, a loud scream came from the house as Donghae inserted the key into the hole, entering the house as soon as he could. He rushed up to the room that he knew was her bedroom. Much to his horror, he found her in bed with her eyes squeez

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Fangirlforlife #1
Chapter 14: Author nim I'm dying because of that clip hanger
Omona_
#2
Chapter 15: What have you decided?
Va_asianloverz
#3
Chapter 1: please update soon
Omona_
#4
Chapter 15: I don't think it really needs rewriting, but if you try to read it again and happen to get some ideas to how to improve it to fit more to your liking, then do rewrite it. I myself am very content with this story, but I know that not being happy with your writing really takes away inspiration. Either way, I'm just really happy you're not deleting this ^^
Jamilah21 #5
Chapter 14: Oh don't you dare to delete this author!!! Sorry if I'm that really rude but I can't help it this fic is getting better and best!! Please the storyline is getting me into it~! You're awesome authornim~! Please update soon! ^_^
TurbulenceTenshi #6
Dear Flow19,
I, as the others, would like to ask you not to get rid of this story. However, if you are not satisfied with it... well, I know what that feels like too. It may be a lot of work, but if you want to change it, then perhaps you should. I do not feel that is necessary, but I am not the one with the story burning inside of me. I do know, though, that you likely have put a lot of work into it already, and that if you delete it, you may regret it. It may still itch at your mind and you may mourn the waste/loss of it. But, maybe you have sufficient distance from it now that this is not a concern. Whatever you decide, I will support your decision.
Take care,
Ashlee
nindindi
#7
Chapter 14: please dont delete this fic unnie, i'll always rereading this fic when i miss your fic to update hehehehe
chosandy1
#8
Chapter 14: I am totally agree with @Omona, don't delete the story. Its hard to fine story base on sooyoung and donghae parring. keep update
Omona_
#9
Chapter 14: DO NOT DELETE THIS! Hey, a new reader here that happened to read it all in one go, hi. I'm not aggressive, I just love this story. Please, don't delete it. Rewrite if you have to, which I don't feel necessary at all, but you can't take this story away from us! It's awesome!