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✩ Miracle ✩ - Label SJ's 2020 Girl Group - Apply Open!| REVIEWS | |
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Accepted - Your app is fine as is and is in the running to be in the group
Pending - I have a few questions but the majority of your app looks solid.
Errors - There's something missing/majorly incorrect on your app that must be fixed. Feel free to contact me if you need help!
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| Leader, Main Vocalist | 2 |
| Lead Vocalist, Visual | 1 |
| Vocalist, Rapper | 1 |
| Vocalist, Face of the Group | 1 |
| Main Vocalist, Maknae | 2 |
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| Heo Shin Ae Shinae |
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Review: Hello again Taylor, thanks for reapplying to Miracle! Shin Ae is really the embodiment of a perfect leader, but she still has nice balancing flaws that leave her open to mistakes. Her relationship with Jung Su is adorable, and I also really like that she has OC friends as well. Her relationship with Hyuk Jae is also very cute, I ship it!
I really like the additions! SM is definitely not going to be portrayed as very nice in this story so everything fits well! Shin Ae is accepted :D
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| Username | lookandseehere |
| Position | Leader, Main Vocalist |
| Love Interest | Lee Hyuk Jae |
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| Jung Jae Hyun J.Hyun |
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Review: Hello Hana, thanks for being my second applicant! Hani is definitely a great visual! Her personality is unique, and I quite like it. The quiet, business-like personality isn't one I see very often and could definitely be fun in a story with such a small cast. I like her relationship with her brothers. Her interactions with Jung Su and Jong Woon are very cute.
Sorry for all the fuss but the fixes were perfect, and she and Zico are very cute together! Jaehyun is accepted .
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| Username | amethyst04 |
| Position | Lead Vocalist, Visual |
| Love Interest | Woo Ji Ho |
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| Harley Lu Riley |
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Review: Hey Bri, thanks for applying! Angelababy is very pretty for sure, and I like that she's Chinese American since most people create Korean Americans ^-^ She's very unique for a leader applicant, since a lot of her traits aren't ones I usually see for leaders :) SM does tend to scout girls pretty young don't they? *eyes Krystal* Her trainee life was good but SM didn't start sending trainees to SJ until February 2016. Also, I would like for you to include what her training at SJ was like and why she resigned a contract with them when hers expired with SM. Wow, she made friends with every Chinese SM trainee except for Yixing? Poor Yixing getting left out of the China club XD Harley actually would have been "one of" the first SJ trainees since there was a whole group of them that were transfered.
I would like more detail on her relationship with Kris. Considering he lives and works in China it would be extremely difficult for her to be in contact with him, and with him being on outs with SM, even as an SJ idol interacting with him would be somewhat taboo (SJ wouldnt care but SM definitely would). You also say that their first date is in China, but I didn't see anything saying they were dating?
I need you to clear up those things before I can accept Harley, but otherwise she looks good!
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| Username | kpopxidiot |
| Position | Main Vocalist, Leader |
| Love Interest | Kris Wu |
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| Hong Jihyun JiJi |
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Review: Hello Mo, thanks for being my first app for the rapper position! Ah Jennie, she's the new face of "badass rappers" I feel like XD Another American! Her personality actually surprised me with how much I like it! I especially like the bit how she likes that she scares people, that isn't something I've seen before but is absolutely something I can us! I can see why no one dared to debut her earlier though, she's someone who would definitely get into scandals. I do really like the idea of her being dropped because she throws a fit over not being int he group. I also really like that part of her decision to audition for SJ was that crush on Teukkie. Her relationship with Seungri is actually pretty cute, and I'm really not a fan of BigBang (or really YG in general) so good job managing that! And oh gosh you're making me feel old OTL I'll be drinking by the time these girls debut OTL
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| Username | hwangbyul |
| Position | Vocalist, Rapper |
| Love Interest | Lee Seunghyun |
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| Areum Park Songbird |
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Review: You finally made it to the review page! :D I hope you don't mind that I changed your position, but only the maknae can have been born in 2001. Sunny as a faceclaim ins't something I see often anymore since she's officially an old lady by KPop standards but she's still so pretty ^^ Areum is certainly a very cute person, though perhaps you could add a few negative traits to her personality? If you want, I know I've had you running around fixing this app for days now XD In her background I wouldn't mind learning why she knows the languages she does, since most people aren't even bilingual nonetheless multilingual? It is really cute that she auditioned for SJ since she's an ELF, I think a lot of people choose companies based on their artists! I should mention that Kyung Bin is actually a huge ball of anxiety so their relationship would be a little different than you protray it, but I can do those edits in story if she's chosen :)
That song though, my heart 3 So she's not perfect, but Areum came a long way since you first submitted her and I'm comfortable putting her under 'accepted' ^^ If you want to keep working on her fee free to keep messaging me, but she's definitely workable so don't worry about it if you're sick of editing your app XD
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| Username | Singer4life |
| Position | Main Vocalist, Maknae |
| Love Interest | Kim Kyung Bin |
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| Choi Min Seo Cherry |
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Review: You didn't take long at all, and anyway Min Seo was worth waiting for! Yeoreum is so pretty, her visuals are highly unappreciated and I love that you used her! Her personality is both detailed and a little contradictory, but in a way that's very well explained and makes her seem all the more human (honestly she reminds me a lot of this girl I know!) I quite like that training wasn't really her main focus until she was pushed aside into SJ. I also like that Wookie was her favorite vocal teacher - he does have phenomenal technique, if anyone can improve a voice rapidly over a few years I dare say it would be him. Okay I literally SCrEamED when I saw her love interest and my parents thought I was dying OTL Na Young is adorable and I can totally picture this relationship in my head yes I love <3 I'm adding Na Young to the CSB page, even if Min Seo isn't in the group these two shall be cute together! Min Seo is absolutely accepted, thanks for applying again!
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| Username | Layni17 |
| Position | Main Vocalist, Maknae |
| Love Interest | Lee Na Young |
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| Choi Nell Nell |
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Review: Hello Meenie, thanks for applying! :D Sung Kyung is super pretty, she's actually one of my favorite ulzzangs! She sort of reminds me just a bit of Wonder Girls' So Hee with her being friendly but awkward, which is super cute ^^ Another person with an idol sibing! However Se7en's parents are alive, and he actually has two older sisters as well. As such your background needs to be edited to reflect that since I do want this story to seem as plausible as possible. I love the idea of her being an actress first though. However, there are several problems with your trainee life. For one thing, the trainees in SJ are all people that SM didn't want to resign contracts with, and I imagine Nell would not be one of those people, being a well-known actress. For another SJ really has no say in which trainees they get so Leeteuk could not have requested her personally. ANd most importantly, SJ has only had trainees since February of 2016 - that's a little under 4 years. As such she can't have been a trainee there for 5 years, especially since the label isn't even that old by the time the group debuts. Eunwoo! He's so cute, I love Astro! But you never mention how they meet? They seem to have known each other for a while but I'm not sure how or when they would have come across each other?
Once you fix those things I have italicized I can accept Nell! Thansk again for applying and if you want any help don't hesitate to PM me!
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| Username | MissMinho |
| Position | Vocalist, Face of the Group |
| Love Interest | Lee Dong Min |
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