Chapter 23: I seriously hope that you haven’t given up on this amazing fic. I think this is one of the bests that I have ever read! You are truly an amazing writer and you should be really proud of yourself! :3
I’ll be waiting if you decide to continue this someday.

Chapter 10: I really love Lay here!! You are amazing omg and the story just keeps getting better and better

Chapter 22: Whoops, seems I'm a little bit late to this update
I can only presume that the ko ko bop hast given thou new strength to persevere ^^

Even if it's not what you expected of this chapter - well, plans are made to be altered, are they not?
It still is a astounding addition to the story, where previously no big battle has occurred and this is a culmination of the current story arc up 'till now.
The switching between different parts of the battle show a myriad of reactions to the battle, whilst also keeping us updated on several character's whereabouts and keeping up the tense atmosphere.
I think this chapter really helps establish everyone's character - like Suho, and Chanyeol - or acknowledging character development - like Baekhyun. The tidbit about Kyungsoo's experience is really neat, by the way - giving us some more context into his education and powers compared to the others who the story has focused on instead up to this point. Kudos to that, and keep it up! I think that it's a good way to shine focus on established characters such as the trio of Kyungsoo, Chaneyeol and Jongdae.

Following from previous chapters, there's no glaring mistakes and even the small (easily missed) grammatical errors are rather minimal and have lessened substantially. On that note...
I'm sorry if I'm nit-picking, but in my opinion I'm not certain it is within Baekhyun's character to say something as serious as the last line. This is his first battle, after all.

Keep up the good work!
Love following this story and always willing to help out! ^^

Chapter 22: Omg thank you so much for the update!!!!!! I was anticipating updates from this story so much
I can only say again, how much I love your story
It's so nice how you describe everything!
Like, it's totally detailed, but still not too much filler to make it boring or something, just right!!
It really feels like a top notch fantasy book.. I love it so much

I'm so excited!! Really don't want to wait till the next chapter haha
But, don't pressure yourself! Live your story very much!!

Chapter 22: Thank you so much for the update!!! I have been waiting, and this was the best surprise ever!! I'm excited for the next chapter! I'm still a little confused on what's up with Kyungsoo, but I will figure it out!

Chapter 22: wow! great update! your story is amazing as always!

Chapter 21: I was so excited to see that you added another chapter! Thanks so much for updating. I really enjoy this story.

Chapter 22: This is so intense i love it!!!!!

Please update soon!!

Chapter 21: lay is so sassy sometimes i can't!!! > _ <