Absence of Mentality

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The mental Hospital that Suho had been working at is under malfunction. Every cell has opened including the top 5 dangerous patients he supervises, consisting of Kyungsoo, Luhan, Chanyeol, Lay, and Sehun. The biggest concern and goal is to retrieve those five before they find their own way out or cause any harm.

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Jeniiin #1
ok i read this like a year ago, and it was so good an the end was just one huge plot twist!
just wanted to drop by and say, this was a great story and i wish more people would read it >,<
teresaginny #2
Chapter 7: It's confusing tho reading this, i don't know which one to focus on. I was wondering if D.O, Kyungsoo, and Soo were the same person with multiple personality all the time. I knew there must be a plot twist when i read about Suho going with the group. I think it'd better if Suho was involved from the first chapter, let it focused on Kyungsoo and the other boys, but not putting Suho's role on the side, that way could explained more why it was all just a delusion or hallucination or even a flashback to Suho. Somehow, Suho's problem wasn't really shown in the story, like was it his experience that created guilty, or was it just his imagination, to put him in the mental hospital at the first place.
However, this story and plot is unique, i also like your choice of words, how you were describe the characters and the hospital, and also i appreciate your good job. Keep writing! :)
Seoulqueenka #3
Chapter 5: This is so crazy!!!!!!!!!!... Please update soon!!!!!!!
shoopshoop #4
Love it !! Thanks for the update
Shimmiin #5
Chapter 2: I dunno really what I think but if you only have Kyungsoo's point of view maybe it won't be so confusing..? Well I don't know, I think it will be good no matter what you do ^ ^
shoopshoop #6
Awesome!!!
lunafxstar #7
Great story!
Shimmiin #8
Chapter 1: I'm looking forward for this story! Fighting~
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